55 Fiction : Rage

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

Rage

Everything about her was beautiful. Her carefree laughter, her playful banter, so much poise… grace … he thought, as he played with her curly hair.
“She is pretty as a field of spring flowers”, said his friend. He had smiled then.
Now, the look in her eyes will haunt him forever, as she lay lifeless.

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26 thoughts on “55 Fiction : Rage

  1. Well well so you are getting into the groove of 55-Fiction… great … and I fourth Miss Kido 🙂 …
    Try some happy ending next time 🙂

  2. Nice template Shilps 🙂

    What should I say about this post!!! Seems you gonna be “55 Fiction” front-runner! 🙂

    Nice one…but we need a happy ending!! 🙂

  3. @ Sweet Nothings!!!: Well…Thanks!! 🙂

    Its a book by Anirban Bose….I have not read it! 🙁

    @ Pawan: Wow! So, I can inspire! I like that! Yes, would love to see your 55 words!

    I wish I could say that about poems…coz I’d never be able to write a poem, the way you do!! 🙂

  4. @ Roshmi, Subhayan and Miss Kido: You can see a Red Shilpa…no, not red with anger, rather embarrassment!

    Your kind words, kinda floored me. Thanks a lot. Your support means a lot! 🙂

    @ Dhiman: Well, you were the pioneer, in this field! I’m just following you! Thanks!
    And yes, a happy ending, next time! 🙂

  5. @ Amrit: Thanks Amrit! No, front-runner, am just a beginner!
    Yes, a happy ending, it shall be next! 🙂

    @ Roshmi: Thanks!

    Changed it on ‘popular feedback’ (Is there a word like this??, I mean like popular demand!!!)

    Most of the time, only the black text was visible on the background of black wooden planks! So changed it to something simpler this time!! 🙂

  6. @ Subhayan: Wow! Same pinch to ur Mom! 🙂

    A poll is done, when in doubt or when you need some answers…this time I know the answer and am not in doubt at all!
    I know Simplicity is the best policy, this time!! 😉

    Nah, now I have become a mini-pro myself, so all own efforts!! And you know, the best thing, it didn’t take any time to restore all the widgets too! It was so fast this time!!
    I know, I need to thank you! 🙂

  7. Hi Shilpa,
    I was sick for few weeks,so did not check out your blog for sometime.I liked this 55 fiction stuff.I wrote one in my blog in fiction category.It was a continuation of 55 fiction story of another blogger friend,but it can be read in isolation as an independent story.
    I have written a 55 fiction follow up for your story too.This too makes a independent read.Check it out.Here it goes

    He loved her dearly, more than even himself. She was intelligent, humane and adorable. He knew it couldn’t be just an accident. Why should she fall off a terrace just like that?
    A dream answered his doubts. It was his friend, who too loved her but not enough to sacrifice his love. He sacrificed her.

  8. @ Dheeraj Kattula: Hi! Welcome back on “A rose is a rose is a rose!”

    That’s just an AMAZING story! I liked it!! And a new angle to my story! Wow!! A very wonderful story indeed! 🙂

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