Friday’s 55 Fiction: The Truth

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

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The Truth

She was inconsolable. Her eyes were all swollen… red, but the tears were just flowing…

Memories flashed in front of her as she lay alone that night.

He was the best… the best husband, the best friend, the best lover and the best actor… and only she knew him best.

He had to be disposed.

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35 thoughts on “Friday’s 55 Fiction: The Truth

  1. hmm….now this one is a real nice one…and the picture compliments it wonderfully

    becoming a pro with 55 fiction !!!

  2. Hey um confused!!! was he unfaithful(only she knew him best) or was she (he had to be disposed)..???

    nd yeah frm now on, i’ll not be appreciaitng ur 55ers (as they dont need it anymore) bt only cmnting on d story:)

  3. @ Vipul: Why the confusion?

    Was he unfaithful…May be, coz only she knew him best.

    I guess, focus on ‘the best actor’..you will get a different thought.

    What do you think now?? 😀

  4. hi shilpa..
    was interested in ur blog name and ended up here..today only i wrote a 55 fiction too!!
    wen i saw ur post i was astonished!!
    anways coming back to your post!!
    it is good..
    But i got confused in the end!!
    he cheated her??
    disposed in what sense??

  5. “”He was the best… the best husband, the best friend, the best lover and the best ACTOR… and only she knew him best””

    Confusion ends with “actor”.

    This is a Masterpiece!!!!

    To paraphrase one of my recent post titles:–

    “”The Shilpa’s Masterpiece!!””

  6. yeah ofcourse i noticd the BEST ACTOR nd it made things clear uptill tht point.. bt sumhow d last wrd DISPOSED totally changed the meaning of d whole story. I mean it is this wrd which confused me 🙁

  7. @ Roshmi: Thanks Girlie!!
    Am glad you liked it!! 🙂

    @ Shruti: Hi Shruti! Welcome on “A rose is a rose is a rose!”

    Astonished?? To see what?? 🙂

    Cheated…may be!

    Disposed…She got rid of him…murder???

    Got what I mean??

  8. @ IndianPundit: Thanks…I guess, you guys are too extravagant with words!!

    🙂 🙂 Wide Smile though 🙂 🙂

    @ Vipul: Disposed…got rid of him…murder??
    Confusion cleared?? 🙂

  9. @ Sid: Thanks and join the club!! 🙂
    BTW, you can post it any day!!
    It’s just that I liked the idea of Fifty Five Fiction and Friday and thus started writing a series of Friday’s 55 Fiction!!

  10. Excellent!
    Well, I thought that the husband would be dead as usual but this one is too good!
    The relationship died!

    Shilpa, you are the best entertainer with 55 fiction!

  11. @ Pawan: Thanks for the encouraging words Pawan!! 🙂 🙂

    @ Vipul: Yeah, and it sounds like the title of those fat hindi novels! 😛

    @ Avdi: Am glad you liked it! And you must explore this!!

    I am not into that league, please…am just a juvenile in that aspect.
    Thanks for your confidence though!! 😀

  12. @ Rane: 🙂

    @ Musings of a lonely traveler: Thank you!
    And thanks for dropping by.
    And please, you must try this short fiction and let us know when you do it. Would like to read your expression!!
    All the best! 🙂

  13. You are becoming a pro in this form must say and Friday 55 …so does this mean we’ll see 55-Fiction every Friday ? If so then it’ll be great

  14. @ Musings of a lonely traveler: Can’t do it still. U may sort this problem by making your comment section as a pop-out. You may go to Settings then Comments and then Comment form placement and then select Pop up window.

    Did you try posting the comment as an outsider??
    A friend had similar problem, and was sorted out by this pop-up window comment box! Try it!! 🙂

  15. wow..very good one.. i think you and shruthi have very strict competition in writing 55 fiction…like blog a ton why dont u start something for 55 fiction..???

  16. @ Musings of a lonely traveler : Am happy to help!! 🙂

    @ Shankar: Am glad you liked it!
    It’s not only Shruti but Sid and Musings of a lonely traveler have also entered into this foray and are pretty impressive at 55 Fiction!!

    That’s a great idea!! Will think about it!
    And why don’t you try this 55 Fiction?? More the merrier!! 🙂

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