Friday’s 55 Fiction : So Close, Yet So…

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


So Close, Yet So…

“Damn!” she said, as he helped her pick the fallen tomatoes. A coy “Thanks” and two smiles were exchanged, that day and then every day.

Some long chats… shared laughter… growing together …blissful moments later she mused, “When you click together, you are bound to leap into the future mentally”.

And, he answered, “I can’t.”


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25 thoughts on “Friday’s 55 Fiction : So Close, Yet So…

  1. @ Neha : Yeah…sad for the girl! 🙁

    Am glad you found it good! 🙂

    @ Shahid : Thank you! 🙂

    @ Roshmi : Thanks Girl. 🙂

    @ kavita : Hmm…honest and perceptive enough to read her thoughts so clearly!!

    Thanks for the appreciation! 🙂

  2. @ Madhu Rao : Thank you Madhu! 🙂

    @ Musings of a lonely traveler :Am glad you liked it Mohammed! 🙂

    @ Mr : Thanks 🙂

    Had deactivated that due to some nuisance. Reactivating now!

    @ pRiYaN : Thank you Priyan. 🙂

    Hmm…that would had given a happy ending to it or a new beginning!! 🙂

  3. I would have loved to say “Wow!!”, but then I didn’t get an inkling of what you wanted to say.

    Now please write a “So close, yet so far… for Dummies” and tell me what was it all about. And before you say it, I know I am an idiot. 🙂

  4. @ Vipul Grover : Hmmm…. 🙁

    …toot jaata hai…toot jaata hai! :p

    @ Shashank Shekhar : Thank you. 🙂

    @ Mohan : Welcome on a “A rose is a rose is a rose!”, Mohan!

    You must write a 55 Fiction. Looking forward to your tale in 55 words!! 🙂

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