Friday’s 55 Fiction : Renaissance

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.



She bumped into me and I bumped my head against the windowsill.
Despite the pain, I saw tears in those big eyes.
Despite the pain, I smiled.

We smiled every day, thereafter. Always together. Always talking.

One day, I held her hand.
And, Mrs. Gupta shouted, “Children!!”

Class 6-A was never better, he fondly remembered.

Acknowledgement : Thank you Pawan for sharing this beautiful storyline.

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34 thoughts on “Friday’s 55 Fiction : Renaissance

  1. oh wow, this is one of the best 55ers i have read..such a beautiful young or I should say; child love story 🙂

    @ Sid, it is about two 6 standard students..the guy holds the hand of his classmate and teacher interrupts..

    so shilpa, kudos to successfully confused the 55 fiction writer himself 😀

  2. @ Wake up, Sid: Now do you think a teacher would cry if a student has hit a windowsill?

    And the picture also gels with the story.

    I guess u typed this comment straight from bed (12:13 AM), hence the confusion.

    So wake up man 🙂

    @ Shilpa: Awesome 🙂

  3. Pure innocent unadulterated Love! Now thats awesome!
    My first encounter with 55 fiction…and am loving the idea. You never know i might join in 🙂
    Much Love,

  4. @ Siddhesh & Pra : You got your answers here in the comments. 🙂

    @ Shri Krishna : 🙂

    @ Chatterbox : Thank you CB 🙂

    @ Neha : Thanks a lot Neha! And thanks for clearing Sid’s doubts too 🙂

    @ Pawan : 🙂

    @ vEnKy : :). Good question!! 😀

    @Lakshmi Rajan : LOL 😀

    @ lostworld : Friday’s are for 55 Fiction! 😀

    May you have a beautiful and wonderful experience now! 😀

    @ Sorcerer : Thanks a lot 🙂

    dattaabhishek : Thanks. You think so?? 🙂

  5. @ Nethra : Thanks Nethra 🙂

    Fridays are for 55 Fiction…so check them out! 🙂

    @ Tavish : Thks 🙂

    Your 55 F is good too! 🙂

    @ Subhayan : Thanks a TON Subhayan!! I can’t stop beaming!! 🙂

  6. @ Guria : Thanks 🙂

    @ Geeta : Thanks Geeta 🙂

    Yours is a good first attempt! 🙂

    Cheers 🙂

    @ Vipul : Thank you Vipul. Look forward to your story! 🙂

    @ Chetan : 🙂

    @ Gyanban : Thks 🙂

    Fiction! 🙂

  7. @ Dhiman : Thanks for your support and kind words, Dhiman. 🙂

    @ Zeenat : Thank you Zeenat. Am glad you liked it!!

    And you must share your thoughts in 55 words too! Looking forward to your 55 Fiction!

    Cheers 🙂

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