Friday’s 55 Fiction : Requiem for a Dream

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

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Requiem for a Dream

A tear rolled down her cheek, as she covered her son. He had cried himself to sleep. She tried to explain rationally, hugged him lovingly and then rebuked him sternly.
He remained adamant.
She understood his pain.
She had to move on. And leave the pain of betrayal behind.
Being a single mother is tough.

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23 thoughts on “Friday’s 55 Fiction : Requiem for a Dream

  1. Another post on relationships. Remember, sometime ago I advised you to write a full length story about relationships? It’s hight time you do that!

  2. Shilpa, I am not a fan of 55-ers..but I love reading yours as they have some meaning behind them..so many other writers write for the sake of it..they should learn how to write it from you..tc 🙂

  3. I’m with Pawan..Pls write a long long post on the same.

    This was well-written. You’ve mastered the art of 55 fiction writing! 🙂 Always a hidden msg and a strong motive.

  4. @ Pawan : I know… and I remember! A long story, needs time! And you know what takes most of my time!! 😀
    Will do…sometime!! 🙂
    Thanks for reinforcing!! 🙂

    @ Mahesh : Thanks 🙂

  5. @ Neha : Thank you Neha. Am truly honored!

    Nah…there are too many brilliant writers…I am just sharing my bit!!

    @ Gyanban : Yeah, sadly it is!! Thanks 🙂

    @ theschmuck : Thanks Sweta 🙂

  6. @ lostworld : I’ll try sometime!! :p

    Thanks 🙂

    @ Shahid : Thanks Shahid.

    The pic…shows shattered dreams…and No! The mother didn’t poison her kid!! :O

    @ BK Chowla : That’s really so kind and sweet of you Mr. Chowla! I am speechless :p

  7. Shilpa your 55-ers are really packed with so much to interpret …my God …. this one too … I know the pain of single motherhood very closely…you got it spot on….

  8. @ Dhiman : Am glad you like them, Dhiman. Do you know that it was your blog that introduced this format of micro-fiction for the first time to me!!
    So many thanks to you! 🙂

    Cheers 🙂

  9. @ Tavish : Thanks! I am honored!! 🙂
    Sure, take your time!! 🙂

    @ Venky : Oh yes, its not impossible but the road when travelling alone throws a lots of challenges!! Agree completely.

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