F is for… Forbidden

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


Even after 4 years, the sparks of attraction flew between them, across the room.
“I know you are married now,” she said.
” You have to go back,” she added hesitantly.
“I have to go back”, he said after a while.
“I’m sorry… It’s time to move.”
And off he went to pack his bags.

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67 thoughts on “F is for… Forbidden

  1. Wow nice one. This is my first time to hear about 55 Fiction. I only know about the 100-word stories contest held by Reader’s Digest and I didn’t even attempt to write one. Haha. Kudos to you.

    • Oh you must try this out, Dee. It is fun to express yourself in limited words… I like it when I have to work on either adding a word or deleting 1-2 words to make it a perfect 55! 🙂 Thanks Dee 🙂

  2. Oh 🙁 Feeling bad for them. Great post….loved your story. Have heard such stories so many times from friends, but each time I do FEEL for both parties. The ‘if only’ lingers…..

    Good job!

  3. HI Shilpa

    Good one there and boy I am glad its 55 fiction. With you and a couple of my other blogger friends spinning one post after another on a daily basis, its getting tough to read them promptly! 🙂

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