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Breach

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Stirring slowly, she opened her eyes taking in the unfamiliar surroundings.

She looked around but her mind was too groggy.

She tried to get up, but felt stiff all over.

She could feel it in her bones that something terrible had happened to her

She shouted but the voice she heard was no louder than a rat’s squeak.

And then the stench of urine that had fermented the whole night hit her.

Hot tears welled up in her eyes as the last she remembered was entering this beautiful room at the resort and drinking something that her boyfriend gave her.

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Linking it to Write Tribe’s 100 Words on Saturday : Picture Prompt

68 Responses

    1. Oh yes, such a nightmare that will last for a long long time. Thanks Beloo. Glad you liked this attempt! 🙂

  1. Sad story, nicely expressed.
    At least she’s not killed, but has to live with the trauma for a lifetime… Really wish all this never happened.

  2. A nightmare for her…terrible experience. Great story writing, I had written a similar one some time back.

    1. Truly tragic and terrible indeed! Thank Sulekha. Will check out your story too. Can you share the link pls! Thanks 🙂

  3. Oh! It’s scary and terrible what happened to the young girl. The guy’s a maniac! Beautifully churned and written in a crisp way as you hold ur readers in sway. Well done, Shilpa:)

    1. Oh yes, like they say all that glisters is not gold! Thanks Shailaja. Glad that you liked this attempt! 🙂

    1. Oh yes, this breach of trust by known people is not uncommon! And so many people are victimized.
      Thanks Sushree! 🙂

    1. Well, the story is in response to this picture prompt! Glad you liked this piece of writing, Shubhangi

    1. Hope she does! While the physical scars may heal, the mental scars may take a long long time to heal!

  4. Life can be so cruel at times.
    Unfortunately, such incidents are on the increase in our society.
    You handled a sensitive topic very well.

  5. Young minds are so easily lured into traps that promise love and better life. When truth hits them, it is too late… Wonderfully narrated Shilpa!!

    1. At times like these rationality, caution and sanity are thrown out of the window. And one can only regret and repent later. Thank you Reshma!

    1. Oh there are all kind of people in this world, who have no qualms in using and manipulating and destroying people! 😐

  6. Really nice Shilpa, you have shown the reality….such date-rape crimes have become really common these days. The description was touching and made the entire trauma come out real.

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