55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Destiny??
They shared a beautiful relationship. He could tell her everything or nothing at all, yet she understood everything.
Today was no different than the three years of their togetherness. As he told about the office politics, she sensed his inner turmoil.
“Out with it”, she said.
Sadly but unwaveringly, he said, “I can’t marry you.”
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18 Responses
Ouch!!! That is hard hitting
so sad…but beautifully written..
Hmmmm… interestingly it the women who have the intuitive minds !!!!
Sad that he wanted to end such a long relationship.
Oh thatz so sad 🙁
Oh thats sad. Written well.
Beautiful that is.. I am loving 55 fictions.. 🙂
Very sad .Beautifully written ,like always !
well that blows :/
Perhaps, he sensed her intuitions and was being frank.
Unfortunate to break such long relations., though.
Cant trust men.
If they shared a beautiful relationship, why would he want to break-up?
Not sure…
painful…what a betrayal…
awww thats bad …
Ouch. That is hard!
@ Phoenixritu, Neha, Aashi, Nethra, Swaram, Insignia, Bedlam, Kavita, Sweta, lazy pineapple, Rajlakshmi, Angel : Agree completely! Its Sad, Bad and Mad! 🙁
@ BK Chowla : Yeah may be. Its tragic, truly. 🙁
@ Purba : Ah…there could be many reasons…family pressures/demands, some personal agenda… 🙁
@ Jarlin : yeah, may be.
Hmmm the comments are interesting as well as few are quiet judgmental… why do it has to be betrayal only ? there could be many reasons too for someone to say I can’t marry especially when the story says they shared 3 beautiful years of togetherness … Good 55F though 🙂
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