Friday’s 55 Fiction : Destiny??
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
They shared a beautiful relationship. He could tell her everything or nothing at all, yet she understood everything.
Today was no different than the three years of their togetherness. As he told about the office politics, she sensed his inner turmoil.
“Out with it”, she said.
Sadly but unwaveringly, he said, “I can’t marry you.”
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June 11, 2010 11:13 am|
Ouch!!! That is hard hitting
June 11, 2010 11:17 am|
so sad…but beautifully written..
June 11, 2010 11:21 am|
Hmmmm… interestingly it the women who have the intuitive minds !!!!
June 11, 2010 11:40 am|
Sad that he wanted to end such a long relationship.
June 11, 2010 12:11 pm|
Oh thatz so sad 🙁
June 11, 2010 1:00 pm|
Oh thats sad. Written well.
June 11, 2010 1:40 pm|
Beautiful that is.. I am loving 55 fictions.. 🙂
June 11, 2010 3:12 pm|
Very sad .Beautifully written ,like always !
June 11, 2010 8:26 pm|
well that blows :/
June 12, 2010 5:26 am|
Perhaps, he sensed her intuitions and was being frank.
Unfortunate to break such long relations., though.
Cant trust men.
June 12, 2010 7:40 am|
If they shared a beautiful relationship, why would he want to break-up?
June 13, 2010 11:16 am|
June 13, 2010 12:59 pm|
painful…what a betrayal…
June 13, 2010 4:16 pm|
awww thats bad …
June 13, 2010 5:34 pm|
Ouch. That is hard!
June 15, 2010 7:43 am|
@ Phoenixritu, Neha, Aashi, Nethra, Swaram, Insignia, Bedlam, Kavita, Sweta, lazy pineapple, Rajlakshmi, Angel : Agree completely! Its Sad, Bad and Mad! 🙁
@ BK Chowla : Yeah may be. Its tragic, truly. 🙁
@ Purba : Ah…there could be many reasons…family pressures/demands, some personal agenda… 🙁
@ Jarlin : yeah, may be.
June 15, 2010 4:17 pm|
Hmmm the comments are interesting as well as few are quiet judgmental… why do it has to be betrayal only ? there could be many reasons too for someone to say I can’t marry especially when the story says they shared 3 beautiful years of togetherness … Good 55F though 🙂
July 1, 2010 7:53 pm|
Jor ka jhatka dheere se lagey!