My father believed that I would never make it big in life.
My mother never said anything but her silence said a lot.
Relatives and friends had trouble suppressing their smirks in my presence.
Ha! How much I’d love to see the look on their faces when they see me living in the lap of luxury…
And on television, today, as India’s Most Wanted!
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. This time the entry must word Love and just 5 sentences to complete a story.
Linking it to January 2014 Ultimate Blog Challenge and NaBloPoMo
To read posts by fellow friends and UBC and NaBloPoMo participants, click here Jairam, Kajal, Kathy, Michelle, Nabanita, Richa, Suzy Que, Sheethal. Yes, we can do we with some more cheering and support. 
46 Responses
Is it about the Host of the Show?…lols 😉
Suhaib Ilyasi!! That’s a good one, Praveen!! I didnt had him in mind, but it can be interpreted that way too 😀
Wow!! Nice one here…I did not see that coming…till the 4th sentence. 🙂
Thanks Kajal. Glad that it took you by surprise! 🙂
Fathers, are generally accurate 😛
Destination Infinity
Oh yes, they are!! 🙂
Interesting… nothing mushy, no lover murdered, no one pining… just a lot of misplaced ego of a criminal! Good one.
Arvind Passey
http://www.passey.info
Thanks a lot, Mr Passey! Glad you liked this fiction 🙂
😯 wow..you connected love word and life of a criminal.. how do you guys come up with such stories.. amazing!!! 🙂
LOL 😀 Thanks a lot Archana! Glad you liked this story line 🙂
You are so clever and this little story is brilliant. ♥
oh wow! I didn’t see the twist of the last sentence coming! 🙂
Thanks Nabanita! 🙂
Brilliantly done Shilpa!! Certainly a master-stroke 🙂
Glad you liked this micro-fiction, Reshma 🙂
Wow…didn’t see that coming!
Thanks Maddie. Glad it took you by surprise! 🙂
MOST WANTED! 😀 😀
ha ha… lovely twist at the end…! I guess Dad’s are generally right
Oh yes, Dads know it all… after all Pita ji hain!! 😛 😀
Hey, don’t be an ordinary boring person. Either you should be famous or you should be notorious.
Not notoriously famous? 😛
hahaha… creativity! thy name is Shilpa 😀
Lol 😀 Tkhs Roshan 🙂
HA HA HA HA…..This one was quirky 😀
It is! Good to see you after a long time, Smita!! 🙂
Oh lol, good twist Shilpa.
Thanks Suzy 🙂
Fathers always are always right when it comes to their daughter.
Sons can take a back seat..
Too much, Shilpa! You’re giving Jeffery Archer serious competition now. 😉
Lol … Such misplaced pride. I’m sure many of our infamous dons think like that.
Well but he did achieve it no? Like they say any publicity is positive publicity perhaps he extrapolated it to everything…
Wow. These are really strong words 🙂
Hahaha..I love your twists at the end.. 😆
Very powerful !! Shilpa, this masterstrke is your masterpiece!! Beautifully written.
Please read ‘masterstroke’. Sorry for the typing error.
Wow! That one ended with a big bang!!
Love love the twist in the end, Shilpa 😛
WOW! Richa paints a masterpiece every time and this time too your canvas has all the right hues.
Sorry sorry , I made a mistake SHILPA.
Ha ha! An end that made my eyes wide! A good twist for a 5 sentence piece Shilpa!
*open wide 😛
I’m in a daze now. How do you come up with such master strokes at such short intervals. You sure will be a published author one day. Autograph please:)
Lol! He did make it big in Life! 😛
Love love love this
Haha 😀
Don’t know why but I couldn’t control laughing as I read the last line. It’s really interesting. Kudos. 🙂
Silly Smiles… Take you Miles 🙂
Congrats to you on selection to WOW group.