Be There
Behind her she heard laughter.
Her throat constricted and unshed tears stung her eyes as she rushed out of the room.
She felt his presence as he sat down beside her on the concrete step.
He didn’t speak, and neither did she.
She met his gaze and saw a look of understanding and genuine concern.
And suddenly the dark clouds lifted and a ray of sunshine brightened the dark corridors in her heart.
Yes, sometimes you need someone to simply be there. Not to fix anything , but just to let you know that you are supported and cared about.
Linking this to Write Tribeโs 100 Words on Saturdayย prompt : A free write using the opening lines: Behind her she heard laughter/ screamingโฆ and 5 Photos, 5 Days Challenge for which I was tagged by Genevive Angela.
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July 25, 2015 5:47 pm|
Lovely one, Shilpa!
July 25, 2015 5:49 pm|
Awesome post… ๐
July 25, 2015 8:45 pm|
So sweet! ๐
July 25, 2015 9:52 pm|
You said it, all that one needs at times is to be there!
July 25, 2015 10:26 pm|
Wonderful take on the prompt Shilpa! Yes indeed the best thing in life is to have such person by your side!
July 25, 2015 11:15 pm|
Beautiful Shilpa
July 25, 2015 11:34 pm|
I can so completely relate to this one Shilpa. Sometimes we just need people to be there- virtually or otherwise. No words needed.
July 26, 2015 9:40 am|
A shoulder to lean against – sometimes even the strongest souls need that ๐ Nice one, Shilpa
July 26, 2015 10:36 am|
This poem is soooooo true! <3
July 26, 2015 2:17 pm|
Love the last lines, Shilpa. It’s so true about any relationship, the very act of being there and saying nothing:)
July 26, 2015 2:19 pm|
The silent support of a friend speaks volumes, lovely.
July 26, 2015 4:31 pm|
well said shilpa,sometimes we don’t need word at all… just being there is enough for the person.
July 26, 2015 6:10 pm|
Loved your take on the prompt, Shilpa ๐ Beautifully done!
July 27, 2015 10:10 am|
You have a special way with words to create good sentences and emotions. Perhaps you should turn to some serious writing- short stories to begin with.
July 27, 2015 11:31 am|
Completely agree. Just knowing that someone is there acts like a balm.
July 27, 2015 12:20 pm|
Totally agree. Sometimes, all we need is that little presence ๐
July 27, 2015 12:52 pm|
Lovely read! Words lose their charm when silence speaks!
July 27, 2015 1:44 pm|
What a lovely take on the prompt! “Be there!” ๐
July 30, 2015 11:48 am|
Beautifully written Shilpa. Loved the message. ๐
July 31, 2015 2:52 am|
๐ sometimes all we need is someone who will seat with us through our tough times.
August 1, 2015 1:05 pm|
how beautifully you expressed it ๐ Silence speaks louder sometimes.