I was beginning to fume but his smile disarmed me.
In three long strides he came towards me.
As he stood behind me, our eyes locked in the mirror.
I felt a tingle of awareness as he ran his hand softly through my hair.
Looking all business, he asked, “Haircut or just some trimming ?”
24 Responses
Aha! Non chalant and maddening. 🙂
You bet 🙂
Haha you had me there Shilpa…! 🙂
Glad you enjoyed reading it, Nabanita 🙂
the punch at the end was effective! 🙂
Thank you M 🙂
Hahaha, you sneaky you 🙂
😀
Argh– such a let down.
Hahaha… sorry 😀
Haha..I was expecting more romance flying in the air!! but, the punch was awesome 🙂
Thanks Madhavi. Glad you liked this 55er 🙂
Shilpa, have you been rubbing shoulders with Shailaja lately? This is like her style, meaning great! 😉 <3
Aha! Thanks for the compliment, Elly ♥
You are simply brilliant shilpa ! admire your posts !!
Thank you so much, Genevive. Glad you like it here 🙂
Too good….what a fiction twist in the end….felt like this should continue and suddenly jor ka jhatka… 🙂
Thanks a lot, Pracz. Glad that you enjoyed reading this one 🙂
Oh, what a great last line! You got me there, Shilpa 🙂
Thank you Beloo. Glad you liked this attempt 🙂
Aahaa! That was a good twist …:)
Thank you Jayashree 🙂
Haha. Good one. Was reminded of school days when I used to be scared of getting hair cuts 🙂
My son used to cry a lot during haircuts till he was 3 or 4. 🙂