I was beginning to fume but his smile disarmed me.
In three long strides he came towards me.
As he stood behind me, our eyes locked in the mirror.
I felt a tingle of awareness as he ran his hand softly through my hair.
Looking all business, he asked, “Haircut or just some trimming ?”
24 Responses
Aha! Non chalant and maddening.
You bet
Haha you had me there Shilpa…!
Glad you enjoyed reading it, Nabanita
the punch at the end was effective!
Thank you M
Hahaha, you sneaky you
Argh– such a let down.
Hahaha… sorry
Haha..I was expecting more romance flying in the air!! but, the punch was awesome
Thanks Madhavi. Glad you liked this 55er
Shilpa, have you been rubbing shoulders with Shailaja lately? This is like her style, meaning great!
<3
Aha! Thanks for the compliment, Elly ♥
You are simply brilliant shilpa ! admire your posts !!
Thank you so much, Genevive. Glad you like it here
Too good….what a fiction twist in the end….felt like this should continue and suddenly jor ka jhatka…
Thanks a lot, Pracz. Glad that you enjoyed reading this one
Oh, what a great last line! You got me there, Shilpa
Thank you Beloo. Glad you liked this attempt
Aahaa! That was a good twist …:)
Thank you Jayashree
Haha. Good one. Was reminded of school days when I used to be scared of getting hair cuts
My son used to cry a lot during haircuts till he was 3 or 4.