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Wishful Thinking

55 Fiction

What we had was beautiful, what we had was true.

But what we had is now over, it’s all in the past.

A gripping pain pierces me to see that you have moved on.

I see you happy with him and I’m torn apart from inside.

Someday, I will be over you too.

I think.

Linking this to BAR-A-THON by Blog-A-Rhythm Day 6 Prompt – Wishful Thinking

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40 Responses

  1. I hope it’s someday ‘soon’.

    It’s tough to move on but it’s one of the wisest things we can do especially when that ‘someone special’ doesn’t care anymore.

    Nice take.

    1. Yes, moving on is the way to go for one’s own peace of mind and sanity! Thank you, Tarang. Glad you liked this post!

    1. Yes, ‘what if’ scenarios do not let you move on. But hanging in there for long will make you miss out on life too!

  2. It’s tough to pick up the broken pieces & try to mend when it comes to relationships… Dil hai, koi shisha to nahin…
    Much said in 55 words, Shilpa.

    1. I like what you said about Dil hai koi sheesha to nahin πŸ˜€
      Thanks Anita! Glad you liked this 55 fiction!

    1. Agree completely! Dwelling too much on past misfortunes can spoil the present and the future too. Thanks Suzy, glad you liked this 55 word story!

  3. Wishful thinking serves us best when we are unable to deal with change. Letting go is easier said than done.
    Nice post. Loved reading your 55-ers.

    1. Yeah, old memories warm you up but living in the past will not change the present! Thanks Shashi. Glad you liked the 55ers here. See you around! πŸ™‚

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