I was drawn to her so strongly, as if she had cast a spell on me. She is my life and she knows it too.
Her indifference, yes, it hurts. But the happiness she brings in my life is more than this pain.
Yesterday, when I was peering at her through the window, I saw her brooding.
A searing pain shot through my heart. I wanted to put my arms around her but she ruined it.
The policeman who booked me for harassing her, called me sick and obsessive. I smiled, ‘Aah! When was the road to true love easy!’.
Linking this to July 2014 Ultimate Blogging Challenge and NaBloPoMo
This month, I plan to share Drabbles on Emotions along with a few book reviews.
70 Responses
Wow… that’s an interesting side of the story! Nicely put! 🙂 🙂 Way to start the UBC 🙂
Thank you Shalini. 🙂
Good to note that we are doing the UBC together 🙂
ahh from a different perspective… You expressed is very well.
Thanks Raj 🙂
Beautiful twist at the end, Shilpa. THen again, you are a master of the art 🙂
Oh, you are too generous, Shailaja 🙂 Thanks 🙂
This story justifies the fact that love is blind…because love follows the path of its own through feelings and not through eyes…lovely drabble!
True that! But this obsessive love or the one sided love can be really scary for the other person!
Yeah, that could be painful, especially when you are misunderstood like that…perspective 🙂
Oh yes, it is all about perspective. Like they say, one person’s craziness is another person’s reality!!
Nice! Sometimes our intentions are completely misread.
Yes and that can change the whole course of the relationship!
The way to true love is never easy. Very nicely you have concluded!
Thanks Ma’am! 🙂
Oh No! What a nice insight into the mind of a stalker. 🙂
Thanks Jo. Glad you liked it 🙂
So often our intentions are misread. Glad he could smile through it all.
May be in this case they were correct!
But Obsession often kills the love! Wonderfully penned!
Oh yes. It can be so stifling! Thanks Nibha! 🙂
Finally his side of the story. 🙂
Yes 🙂
sad for him. one sided love. beautifully written,shilpa
And now behind bars too 😛
Thanks Asha 🙂
Indeed, the road to love is bumpy and extremely confusing.
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True that! Good to see you here Anupama, after a long long time. How have you been?
hmmm now .. i feel sorry for the guy..
but still it is wrong to do it
Bikram
Absolutely wrong!
Wow : Everything is fair in love n war. This is obsessive love – so all the more.
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UBC + NaBloPoMo + Drabble – there cant be a better all rounder in the field of blogging than u.
Aah! But this kind of obsessive love is scary and suffocating!
Thanks Viyoma! 🙂
Yeah it’s never easy. Well penned!
Thanks Umang 🙂
Never thought I would hear it from the other side. Great idea and a great read!
Thanks Preeti. Glad you liked this piece of writing! 🙂
Oops…loved this perspective! Great start to UBC! Looking forward to your lovely drabbles!
Thanks Aditi 🙂
When was the path to true love easy, finishing so beautifully, Shilpa:)
Thank you Vishal 🙂
You are a pro in this….verrry well written!
Aha! Look who is here? Back from hibernation? 😀
Thanks Smita 🙂
The path to true love is a turbulent one, great post.
It is !!
Wow, finally someone wrote from his perspective! Loved how the point is put in a short and effective way here 🙂
Thank you Vinodini! 🙂
Why do not you compile your short stories , these 100 stuff and offer to a literary agent ?
Aha! I am beaming at your suggestion! Thank you, Anil. But I guess, there’s still a long way to go! 🙂
A very interesting write-up on a perspective that is often missed. But not on your blog 🙂 Nicely done, Shilpa!
You are too generous, Beloo. Thanks 🙂
Yes, that’s what a stalker thinks he’s doing. Sigh
Sadly, he thinks that he is doing it right! 😐
Nice twist, where passion turns to obsession. 😀
Thanks Kathy! And it can be so unnerving for the other person!
That is one difficult road he has taken 🙂 Interesting to read the other side.
Difficult and the one that will not lead to success! Thanks Leo 🙂
Love how you are committed! 😀 Looking forward to your Drabbles!
Thanks Vidya! Loved your The Pebble in the Shoe post 🙂
A good start to the UBC. Look forward to more :-).
Thank you Jayanta. Are you participating in UBC too?
One side love hurts 🙁 Liked your take on it
Carol @ Battered Hope
Yes, it can be very devastating! Thanks Carol 🙂
I always love reading your Drabbles. And enjoyed this one too 🙂
Thanks Sheethal. Looking forward to read a lot from you too 🙂
How awful to be on the receiving end of love like that!
Very!! 😐
I dont feel sorry for him.
Pyaar Mein Toh Yeh Hota Hai
Agree, the stalkers should be banished!
ohh.. thats sad… this one sided love.
Tina from The Sunny Side of Life
Hmmm… one sided love, yes it’s sad, but stalking and obsession… well that’s bad!
Oh 🙁 Poor love 🙁 Well, as you’ve rightly said, the road to love is never easy 🙂
Hmmm… never 😐