Every Once In A While #writebravely #celebratewritetribe
Every once in a while, I close my eyes and you’re all that I see, smiling down on me.
Every once in a while, I dream about you and dream some more, about our life together.
Every once in a while, I look at our pictures and remember the frozen moments of our life.
Every once in a while, I let my eyes be washed by tears, to see life with a clearer view once again.
Every once in a while, I do all these again remembering our love and all things which could have been but would never be!
I’m Writing Bravely for the Write Tribe Festival of Words – March 2019
Day 7 : One Word Prompt – Grief
March 10, 2019 1:46 am|
This one brings out the sadness, the grief and the pain so beautifully! So well written, dear Shilpa and well done with the wrap-up post for the FoW2019! You’ve aced it!!
March 10, 2019 4:17 am|
So much said in the chorus of a few well chosen words.
March 10, 2019 9:18 am|
March 10, 2019 9:22 am|
Sad one. True for many.
We grieve for loved ones.
Happy Sunday, Shilpa 🙂
March 10, 2019 9:50 am|
Beautifully said Shilpa. Grief comes in waves, abates and then resurfaces.
March 10, 2019 11:21 am|
No matter how much we try and forget, the grief always remains as a memory.
March 10, 2019 2:14 pm|
It’s so poignant Shilpa… Grief is a powerful emotion and your poem brings it out beautifully
March 10, 2019 3:30 pm|
Wonderfully crafted piece and it brings so much sadness. Yes we do miss our dear ones
March 10, 2019 11:58 pm|
Her feelings though so intense have been subtly put across. A person will continue with her/his life but the pain will linger.
March 11, 2019 7:56 pm|
Tears lessen the burden from the heavy heart. However grief is tenacious, it does return back. Wonder whether time could ever heal it?
March 13, 2019 7:01 pm|
Sad but poignant and beautiful …. grief triggers lovely poetry