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55 Fiction

He never liked kids. He never wanted kids.

He preferred money and silence.

It was apparently an unpopular decision which distressed his wife the most.

Then it happened, obviously accidentally.

Denial, anger, fear gave way to happiness when he saw that little beautiful baby.

He asked his wife for forgiveness and she wished for his.

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Iā€™m Writing Bravely for the Write Tribe Festival of Words ā€“ March 2019

Day 1 : One Word Prompt ā€“ Forgive

28 Responses

  1. Little bundle of joy would always remind them of the virtue of forgiving.
    I am so fascinated by your ability to unfold the story in totality, in as little as 55 words, Shilpa!

  2. One of those accidents that turn out to be good for everyone! So well-woven into the 55-word story format at which you are a master, Shilpa! So glad to see you join the Fow. I’m already looking forward to your lovely posts over the next couple of days. šŸ™‚

  3. No one can beat you Shilpa in flash and 55 Fiction. Loved the tiny tale, probably the most appropriate version of forgive.

  4. The sight of his own flesh and blood made him repent and ask her forgiveness. a beautiful story of hope and acceptance.

  5. Shilpa, you amaze me with your poems and short stories. just in 55 words, yo have expressed so much and so deeply. Tiny human beings is the true miracle of God and has all the powers to bring joy and smile on people around them.

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