Forgiveness #writebravely #celebratewritetribe
He never liked kids. He never wanted kids.
He preferred money and silence.
It was apparently an unpopular decision which distressed his wife the most.
Then it happened, obviously accidentally.
Denial, anger, fear gave way to happiness when he saw that little beautiful baby.
He asked his wife for forgiveness and she wished for his.
I’m Writing Bravely for the Write Tribe Festival of Words – March 2019
Day 1 : One Word Prompt – Forgive
March 4, 2019 4:21 am|
So much said with such few words. Wonderfully done.
March 4, 2019 7:27 am|
Little bundle of joy would always remind them of the virtue of forgiving.
I am so fascinated by your ability to unfold the story in totality, in as little as 55 words, Shilpa!
March 4, 2019 9:35 am|
Short and sweet. Cant believe you used just 55 words. Nice!
March 4, 2019 9:41 am|
As usual I am amazed at how much you pack into your 55 words. It is very relate’able’.
March 4, 2019 9:49 am|
Some “accidents” are good.
March 4, 2019 1:23 pm|
Wonderful weaved tale in shortest possible words
March 4, 2019 10:25 am|
wow…infinite emotions incarcerated within the walls of words with such magnificence!
March 4, 2019 10:45 am|
One of those accidents that turn out to be good for everyone! So well-woven into the 55-word story format at which you are a master, Shilpa! So glad to see you join the Fow. I’m already looking forward to your lovely posts over the next couple of days. 🙂
March 4, 2019 11:07 am|
A happy story told in a few words. Beautiful!
March 4, 2019 11:52 am|
Nice story
March 4, 2019 1:06 pm|
Aww babies can melt the hardest of hearts. Such a sweet story.
March 4, 2019 3:31 pm|
Nice to read.
March 4, 2019 4:22 pm|
Shilpa, It’s so impressive how beautifully you have expressed the emotions in a few words only.
March 4, 2019 6:05 pm|
Beautifully penned down
March 4, 2019 6:23 pm|
No one can beat you Shilpa in flash and 55 Fiction. Loved the tiny tale, probably the most appropriate version of forgive.
March 4, 2019 7:40 pm|
Short and simple 🙂 Good one.
March 4, 2019 10:23 pm|
Probably only one of the accidents that can bring a lot of happiness around. A nicely weaved 55 fiction, Shilpa.
March 4, 2019 10:48 pm|
Short story but so profound. You said a lot in few words. Enjoyed it!
March 5, 2019 12:00 am|
The sight of his own flesh and blood made him repent and ask her forgiveness. a beautiful story of hope and acceptance.
March 5, 2019 12:14 am|
A beautiful story. Denial gives way to acceptance and thereby folly to repentance.
March 5, 2019 3:13 am|
Shilpa, you amaze me with your poems and short stories. just in 55 words, yo have expressed so much and so deeply. Tiny human beings is the true miracle of God and has all the powers to bring joy and smile on people around them.
March 5, 2019 9:01 am|
Profound. Loved this 55 word story. Waiting to read more from you. 🙂
March 5, 2019 2:05 pm|
Amazing the way a little soul can help us realize true love 🙂 Very nicely put in words
March 5, 2019 6:51 pm|
Such a beautiful story! A child can change a person! Wonderfully written.
March 6, 2019 9:53 pm|
A heart-wrenching story…gently touches on healing and humans we become where relationships are painted with strength and the pathos depicted, Shilpa.
March 24, 2019 12:28 pm|
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February 27, 2021 1:15 am|
i really love your posts
May 14, 2023 12:51 pm|
Such a beautiful story! A child can change a person! Wonderfully written.