Friday’s 55 Fiction : The Sped Arrow?
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
The Sped Arrow?
The room had a look of being ransacked, with clothes strewn all over and papers filling in the gaps. Still, the cheque book was elusive.
The phone was ringing incessantly too.
“Come back, Annie …. I can’t do without you”!
Something was turning into ashes, somewhere… his arrogance, his idiosyncrasies and toast among other things.
March 4, 2010 6:49 pm|
That was a wonderful story. 🙂
March 4, 2010 7:06 pm|
Hmmmm….not good for their relationship is it…:)
March 4, 2010 8:01 pm|
Thats was a nice F55… nice story…
Untill next Friday
Cheers!
Tavish
Blog Link: Sensible Bakwas
March 4, 2010 8:35 pm|
I wonder how come you fabricate abstraction with every 55ier….Apt narration.
I liked the words you have used in the last sentence.
March 5, 2010 6:37 am|
very nice 🙂
March 5, 2010 6:45 am|
wow! arrogance and all negative traits burnt along with the toast 🙂
Good work Shilpa!!
March 5, 2010 10:03 am|
lovely and powerful as always Shilpa:):) So much can be conveyed in 55 words!! what does the title mean btw?
March 5, 2010 2:02 pm|
I wish I could introduce myself in 155 ,whereas you say so much in 55 words.
Outstanding.
March 5, 2010 2:08 pm|
The last line was the masterpiece!!…wonderful writing
March 6, 2010 8:09 am|
hey you have almost mastered yourself at 55 fiction. While I still skeptical to give it a try. You are really amazing to put in so many thoughts and conclusion in just 55 words…..Kudos to u!!
March 6, 2010 8:10 am|
hey you have almost mastered yourself at 55 fiction. While I still skeptical to give it a try. You are really amazing to put in so many thoughts and conclusion in just 55 words…..Kudos to u!!
March 6, 2010 11:00 am|
lovely this was 🙂