Friday’s 55 Fiction : All’s Fair…
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
All’s Fair…
It was time, they married. His tactful evasion of the subject every time miffed her.
She knew he loved her.
But he loved his spastic child too and more so after the tragic death of his wife.
At 34, was asking for commitment and security too much?
No, she concluded determinedly.
Time to Dial M??!!
April 30, 2010 4:40 am|
:O never saw this coming at all! insecurity can lead to such things too…great one once again Shilpa..
April 30, 2010 7:21 am|
um,wow!What people WOULDn’t do eh?good one!:)
April 30, 2010 10:27 am|
It’s not the time for M !
April 30, 2010 1:07 pm|
Insecurity is very painfully. I have felt insecure many times. 🙁
May 1, 2010 5:02 am|
That’s so sad!!
I hope the grief makes him decide never to marry 🙁
May 1, 2010 4:03 pm|
What a twist in the tale! I never saw that one coming…
May 1, 2010 5:06 pm|
How insecurity cajoles one to commit heinous crime ! Very well narrated in 55 words. Awesome !!
May 1, 2010 5:06 pm|
How insecurity cajoles one to commit heinous crime ! Very well narrated in 55 words. Awesome !!
May 5, 2010 12:08 pm|
Hitchcockian of you to slip in that last line!