My Untold Story
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Boom! The blast ripped the solemn congregation to bloody tatters.
Dead bodies lay scattered along with slippers and debris soaked in blood, traumatized survivors wailed or simply stared in silent shock.
Oblivious to the horror I would have caused, my last thoughts as I pressed the button was that of meeting God in paradise.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
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September 30, 2013 6:36 am|
Quite a picture you have painted here…I could visualize the calamity and then see him go…Very nice!
September 30, 2013 11:28 pm|
Thanks Kajal. Glad you liked it 🙂
September 30, 2013 9:55 am|
Paradise? Hell might have been a better word?
Destination Infinity
September 30, 2013 11:29 pm|
True, but they are brainwashed to think otherwise! 😐
September 30, 2013 10:01 am|
Such stories should be left untold where bombers think about Heaven while snatching away lives of so many innocent ones.:P
September 30, 2013 11:31 pm|
After this gruesome crime and killing so many innocent lives, they shouldn’t even get a place in hell.
September 30, 2013 10:19 am|
A modern day curse, well penned, Shilpa!
September 30, 2013 11:32 pm|
Thanks Mr Bhatia!
September 30, 2013 11:13 am|
Lucky you. You will get 72 virgins as soon as you go there.
September 30, 2013 11:37 pm|
Ha! Some fancy world they live in when on earth. I am sure that women are not viewed as a commodity in heaven, if that exists!
September 30, 2013 11:26 am|
I really wonder what goes on in their heads. Do they really buy this crap of meeting virgins in heaven after killing innocents? Nicely penned!
September 30, 2013 11:41 pm|
Only some very ignorant and dumb people could be brainwashed to believe such a crappy thing!! Thanks Rachna.
September 30, 2013 11:29 am|
The thots of a Jihadi … v v well penned Shilpa!
September 30, 2013 11:42 pm|
Thank you Meena.
September 30, 2013 11:39 am|
A unique piece. It’s sad how these people are brainwashed to think that they’ll get paradise and all that blah blah if they kill innocent people. Sad.
September 30, 2013 11:42 pm|
I know, truly sad and tragic!
September 30, 2013 1:39 pm|
Wow! That was a brilliant take on the prompt!
It can so scary to wonder how a person can be dangerously blinded by faith or religion!
September 30, 2013 11:44 pm|
Yeah, really surprising. Read about an Afghan boy who shared how they are brainwashed into believing they will survive!
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/asia/afghanistan/9014282/Afghan-boy-suicide-bombers-tell-how-they-are-brainwashed-into-believing-they-will-survive.html
September 30, 2013 2:48 pm|
Very well composed Shilpa..!!
September 30, 2013 11:45 pm|
Thanks Aakanksha.
September 30, 2013 5:09 pm|
Very well-written F-55.
September 30, 2013 11:45 pm|
Thank you Kalpana.
September 30, 2013 7:24 pm|
Different take on the prompt Shilpa. Came here after a long gap, you’ve designed your blog beautifully 🙂
September 30, 2013 11:49 pm|
Thanks and good to see you after a long time, Saravana!
September 30, 2013 9:03 pm|
The fanaticism and the obsession with blind ideologies such men have has been well brought out Shilpa .
September 30, 2013 11:53 pm|
Thanks Jayashree.
October 1, 2013 12:15 pm|
I love the way you build your thoughts powerfully with few words. More power to your pen err…keyboard, shilpa.
October 2, 2013 3:41 pm|
Aww!! Thanks a lot, Asha! You are too generous 🙂
October 1, 2013 3:53 pm|
Absolute sinister!
October 2, 2013 3:42 pm|
Oh yes, sadly!
October 1, 2013 5:51 pm|
That was a chilling account Shilpa. The entire thought process is warped. Congratulations for the WOW post award :-).
October 2, 2013 3:46 pm|
Agree, it is so sad that the suicide bombers are brainwashed to believe that what they would be doing is noble and right!! 🙁
Thanks OM 🙂
October 3, 2013 6:07 am|
Crisp narration Shilpa, it is a pity how innocence is brainwashed to sinister. Violence is never justified for the end is only more loss…
October 4, 2013 10:02 pm|
True, it is so sad and tragic that people are so blind that they cant think the obvious! 😐
November 2, 2013 11:06 pm|
really good!