Together We Will…
This day we take this sacred pledge and promise…
to nurture each other
to grow together in strength
to strive for prosperity
to share our joys and sorrows
to take care of our children and parents
to be together forever
to remain friends, lifelong
And make our life beautiful together, but of course, *Conditions Apply!
Linking to Write Tribeβs 55 on Friday in response to the prompt Conditions Apply
November 29, 2013 12:49 pm|
LOL! It was a good read, the prompt line at the end adds humour to the 55er.
November 29, 2013 2:28 pm|
Thanks, Asha! Glad you liked the punch! π
November 29, 2013 1:01 pm|
Haha of course conditions apply!! π
November 29, 2013 2:29 pm|
Oh yes, the conditions are there all the time! π
November 29, 2013 1:21 pm|
Haha!!!But….of course!
November 29, 2013 2:30 pm|
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November 29, 2013 2:29 pm|
Absolutely if you wanna ne happy with your girl certain conditions have to be followed. Loved this one.
November 29, 2013 2:31 pm|
Absolutely! π Glad you enjoyed this 55er, Sheethal π
November 29, 2013 2:30 pm|
Cute π Love the ending π
November 29, 2013 2:31 pm|
Thanks Jairam π
November 29, 2013 2:53 pm|
Loved the ending.. “Conditional Apply” to everything in life. Nothing is really unconditional right?
November 29, 2013 6:35 pm|
Ideally somethings like love, friendship should be unconditional but usually they are not, sadly!
November 29, 2013 3:00 pm|
Conditions Apply part is a real funny one.
Fantastic poem.
November 29, 2013 6:37 pm|
Thanks Kirtivasan π
November 29, 2013 7:45 pm|
A really good take on the prompt. Yes, conditions apply.
November 29, 2013 8:26 pm|
Thanks Padmanabha!
November 30, 2013 12:22 am|
Ha ha ha he he he…but of course, conditions apply. π
December 3, 2013 9:02 pm|
Thank you Rekha π
November 30, 2013 1:45 am|
Very true Shilpa, brilliant 55er. Life is dotted with stars and they translate to unconditionally mean that conditions apply π
December 3, 2013 9:04 pm|
Thanks for sharing this wonderful perspective, Reshma π
November 30, 2013 8:33 am|
Haha!! The ending was the perfect topping.
December 3, 2013 9:05 pm|
Glad you enjoyed this, Geeta π
November 30, 2013 9:11 am|
yes. yes. yes… Conditions always apply. π
December 3, 2013 9:06 pm|
True π
November 30, 2013 9:20 am|
Yes! conditions apply! π
December 3, 2013 9:06 pm|
Yes, they do, always π
November 30, 2013 10:22 am|
Good one. Reminds of me of the priest asking the question to the marrying couples:
Do you promise to love, honor, cook for, clean up after, surrender your share of the blanket to, live with the flatulence of, relinquish the remote to and with the toilet seat after until death do you part?
December 3, 2013 9:11 pm|
LOL ::D That’s hilarious π
November 30, 2013 2:07 pm|
lol @ Conditions apply π
December 3, 2013 9:12 pm|
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November 30, 2013 2:54 pm|
Conditions certainly apply! Good one again π
December 3, 2013 9:13 pm|
Thank you Neha π
November 30, 2013 5:32 pm|
Excellent explaination of 7 PHERAS and the best is T&C apply
December 3, 2013 9:14 pm|
Thank you Mr Chowla π
November 30, 2013 6:54 pm|
Ha ha.. Shilpa.. Good one. Your promptness with the prompts is amazing!
December 3, 2013 9:14 pm|
LOL π
November 30, 2013 7:52 pm|
Conditions Apply …Of course! π Good crisp read Shilpa
December 3, 2013 9:15 pm|
Thanks B π
December 1, 2013 12:50 pm|
Nice one. Love the way you ended it. Nothing is unconditional is it – my rules apply. Oh lol.
December 3, 2013 9:18 pm|
Glad you enjoyed this 55er, Suzy! π
December 1, 2013 2:08 pm|
Can it get better than that, Shilpa? You have a way with ideal and perfects words for a beautiful relationship:)
December 3, 2013 9:19 pm|
Thank you so much, Vishal. You are too kind π
December 2, 2013 7:55 am|
absolutely!!
Echo in unison over it π
December 3, 2013 9:19 pm|
π Thanks Ruchira π
December 2, 2013 11:00 am|
Shilpa, you are a perfectionist. Whatever is the challenge, you come out as a winner.
December 3, 2013 9:19 pm|
π Thanks Ma’am π
December 2, 2013 5:05 pm|
Haha.. If conditions did not apply we would be all be taken for granted!
December 3, 2013 9:19 pm|
That’s true π
December 6, 2013 12:25 am|
Bullseye Shilpa!…tried formula π well done π
December 21, 2013 5:16 pm|
Thanks Sunita π
December 6, 2013 6:20 pm|
LOL!!! that is very smart π
I have had a similar take on the prompt…may be you’ll like that too
December 21, 2013 5:19 pm|
Thanks Karan. Loved your take too π
December 16, 2013 12:33 pm|
The omnipresent asterix here too !!! T and C apply π π
December 21, 2013 5:20 pm|
You bet! π