A Rose Is A Rose Is A Rose!

Things are as they are, not as they should be!

Small Joys

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She broke into a smile on seeing again her constant companion of these past few months.

Her fingers grazed lightly to caress the soft contours.

As she buried her face and inhaled deeply, the refreshing smell awakened her senses.

Aah! The joy of snuggling up close and feeling the warmth of her freshly laundered blanket.

Β Linking it to Write Tribe Festival of Words – 3 : Day 6 : 55 Fiction

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72 Responses

    1. Oh, I love the smell and feel of the freshly laundered clothes too! πŸ™‚
      Thank you LuAnn! So when are you writing your first 55 Fiction? Looking forward to read your story in 55 words πŸ™‚
      Cheers πŸ™‚

  1. Excellent twist at the end,Shilpa.But you should not have given away the story with that picture.In 55WF it is the suspense and twist that matter most.

    1. Thank you KP! Glad you liked this attempt πŸ™‚
      Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it! Have shifted the picture a bit down. Hope that helps to maintain the twist and suspense. πŸ˜›

    1. Wow! You too, Raj!! Yes, there’s something beautiful about the fresh laundry. Thank you and glad you liked this 55 fiction:)

  2. This is wonderful! As I read first 2 lines my mind raced to come up with various alternatives- puppy, flowers, loved one etc! And finally the twist- blanket!! πŸ˜‰

    1. It’s because, you have never written one!! When are writing your first 55er Asha??
      Aah! That smell! 😎

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