My theme for this year’s Blogging from A to Z April Challenge is Crime Stories in 55 Words. Today’s story, F is for Forgery…
“Dear People. Don’t cry. I’m taking a nap which is going to last till eternity…”
Tears cloud my vision as I read my girlfriend’s suicide note for the nth time.
The detective reminds me to identify her handwriting.
I nod in agreement.
It’s hard to suppress a smile as I admire my handwriting forgery skills.
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Gosh Shilpa!!! That gave me the chills. I’m glad I stopped by. Love thrillers and horror to!
Natasha
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Glad that it had that kind of effect on you, Natasha 😀
Hope he doesn’t get away with it! Nicely done with the plot twist
I hope so too!
Thank you, Sanch!
huh!!! i wish i can push him off a cliff! Very nice Shilpa.
I would like that too. Thank you, Tina.
What a twist in tale. Though I hope he doesn’t get away with it.
Oh, I am sure that the long arm of the law is going to tap to his shoulders sometimes soon. Thanks Manisha!
Gosh! I just started at the climax!
Binging the rest of it right away …
Best Wishes!
Glad you liked this story, Karnika!
What a twist ! This was great. 😕
Thank you, Simran!
OOOOOOO! That was a brilliant twist. I was not expecting that.
Glad you liked the twist ending, Patricia 🙂
My heart broke on that one!
I know he was so ruthless! Thanks Lee!
I was mourning at his loss wondering why she committed suicide! The last line knocked me out with shock!!
Thanks Swathi. Glad you liked this 55er!
You are a mistress of crime fiction…. What mind boggling twists in tale you have been presenting everyday. Love reading them.
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Thank you for your kind words and thanks for reading too, Shalini! You are generous!
Oh gosh, Shilpa! That made me shudder. Despite reading the title, I didn’t guess the ending at all. How vicious!
Thank you, Shailaja. Glad you liked this one!
Ooh, naughty! I love this theme, and this story. 🙂
-Laura @ World’s Coolest Jobs
Thank you Laura! 🙂
Sinister to the hilt… you understand human nature so well
Thank you. Glad you liked this attempt, Pooja 🙂
That was cunning! Unexpected.
Thank you, Tulika.
i enjoy these mini-thrillers. good work. Lightheaded: Retiring at 8300 feet‘
Thanks a lot, Nancy!
Damn! That is good. I actually came looking for your post. And no disappointment at all.
Glad that it had the desired effect, Deepali 🙂
HaHaHa. That’s a good one. Very unexpected ending.
Glad you enjoyed this 55 Fiction, SG 🙂
OMG!!!!!! That was a completely planned and meticulously done crime.. Hope the detective sees through the forgery
You bet and I hope they do!!
Oh mine! Unexpected end! Brilliant!
Thank you, Sheela!
Oh my that was truly an unexpected ending – murder and forgery! This crime series gets better and better.
Thanks a lot, Suzy! Glad you are liking the series so far!
I sure hope he doesn’t get away with it. The body will surely go for postmortem examination, and they will suspect foul play. And, based on all the crime fiction I’ve read and seen so far, the boyfriend will be one of the first suspects. This, in fact, could be the prelude of a brilliant crime fiction novel.
I love the way you thought so much about this, Chicky! I am sure, he would be caught!
Your stories have the most unexpected twists, Shilpa! Really enjoying them!
Thank you Mayuri. Glad you are liking it here. i am loving your food stories too!
Haha! That bugger. Kinda expected he was behind it, but the forgery part was unexpected.
Thank you, Sreesha! Glad you liked it!
This one is my favorite of all of your posts so far! I love the words on her suicide note: ‘I’m taking a nap which is going to last till eternity…’ Simply super 😀
Thanks a lot, Vinodini. Glad you liked this attempt! 🙂
its sad, suicide always gives me a lot of pain, coz its the most preventable form of death, like the way you present the crime series, hats off shilpa !!
Suicide is devastating. But looks like this one isnt suicide.
Thank you for reading, Genevive. Arent you participating in this April challenge this year? I enjoyed your travel series last year!
Ha Ha 🙂 I went back and re read this post to understand properly.. This year I am not participating… getting back to health,handling centre by myself with my colleague on maternity leave, and my daughter writing her last school board exam 🙂 last year I was relaxed and blogged on married life, the year before on travel.. nice to be connected.
Typical villain so proud of his work right? Creepy!
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Hmm… Vanity!!
oooh, very dark and creepy! I like it!
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Thank you, Jodie. Glad you liked this story!
That’s downright criminal. Very Mary Higgins Clark-sy.
Aww! I love your comment, Lata 🙂
Bad bad man! Criminal minds…
Bad bad man, indeed!
Wow..its creepy and what a twist Shilpa. Great stories in few words.
Thank you, Deepa!
that devil! I didn’t expect that ending.
have a lovely day.
Thanks Lissa. Glad you liked the twist ending. You have a lovely day too 🙂
Man!! That literally gave me chills! How do you do this everytime?
Cheers
Thanks Geetika!
Wait, what? Sneaky lil boyfriend 😛
Seriously!! 😀
Masterpiece! I didn’t see that coming! I can see that evil grin on the face of the murderer!
I can see it too. Thanks Shubhangi.
Oh dear!!! What a sudden turn of events….just as I was about to feel sad, I suddenly realised that I felt despice. Awesome!!!
Thank you Karishma:)
hehehe 🙂 smart as ever.
Thank you, Roshan 🙂
Brutal…so evil! Now, I want to know the backstory and yes whether or not he gets away with it.
LOL 😀 No prologue or epilogue for these 55ers! 😀
You’re amazing at delivering the punch, Shilpa! What a mean guy!
Thank you so much, Vidya. Glad you liked this attempt!
Another great story. How do you get this awesome ideas?
Thank you, Sarah for your kind words 🙂
Damn! I didn’t see that coming! :O
Glad you liked it, Shalini 🙂
Oh God! Why did he do this!!
He might have his reasons! 🙁
Fantastic! I need to know more! Did he kill her? Is it an insurance scam? Is she in on it? Haha – see what you’ve started!
Debbie
Hahaha… I am so glad that you liked this one, Debbie 🙂
That wicked person. I wonder where she is?
Have a stroll on The Green, Amble Bay
Flip – fearful – may the smile be wiped off his face …
That broke my heart. Let’s hope that he doesn’t get away with it for too long!