Friday’s 55 Fiction : Destiny??

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


They shared a beautiful relationship. He could tell her everything or nothing at all, yet she understood everything.
Today was no different than the three years of their togetherness. As he told about the office politics, she sensed his inner turmoil.
“Out with it”, she said.
Sadly but unwaveringly, he said, “I can’t marry you.”


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18 thoughts on “Friday’s 55 Fiction : Destiny??

  1. @ Phoenixritu, Neha, Aashi, Nethra, Swaram, Insignia, Bedlam, Kavita, Sweta, lazy pineapple, Rajlakshmi, Angel : Agree completely! Its Sad, Bad and Mad! 🙁

    @ BK Chowla : Yeah may be. Its tragic, truly. 🙁

    @ Purba : Ah…there could be many reasons…family pressures/demands, some personal agenda… 🙁

    @ Jarlin : yeah, may be.

  2. Hmmm the comments are interesting as well as few are quiet judgmental… why do it has to be betrayal only ? there could be many reasons too for someone to say I can’t marry especially when the story says they shared 3 beautiful years of togetherness … Good 55F though 🙂

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