55 Fiction: A Farce
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. Read for the first time at The Chronicles of a techie.
Here is my First Attempt at Fiction and my First Attempt at 55 Fiction!
Sitting on the terrace, one early morning, they smiled as they sipped their tea. They laughed when a squirrel came close. They cheered as the kids played ball. They hummed a silly new song together. What a Bliss! And then a phone call… “Ya..Chetna er Chetan…Tell me… yes…no” and she knew it was all over.
July 16, 2009 8:06 pm|
Great attempt..and of course a great result! 🙂
The story leaves numerous interpretations!! WHat finally happened? What was that phone call about? It would be definitely there in your mind…do share.
July 16, 2009 9:55 pm|
hey tht’s an intriguing one indeed! quite a suspence in d end.. coincidentally evn i hv posted a 55-Fiction 2day.. hav a luk:)
July 17, 2009 6:00 am|
That was perfect ….really a good start… a story with an element of suspense … gr8… and thanks for mentioning my name 😀
July 17, 2009 6:50 am|
awesome one! positively loved it !! … lets see i’ll try one too … (will be a huge flop anyways)
July 17, 2009 7:08 am|
wow..great one…never tried those… its difficult too…..
July 17, 2009 10:00 am|
@ Amrit: Thank you Amrit!!
Yes there could be lot of interpretations. You tell, me what you thought, I’ll share my idea soon! 🙂
@ Vipul: What a coincidence! I checked yours 55 Fiction! Its good!
July 17, 2009 10:06 am|
@ Dhiman: Thanks Dhiman!
I just followed the words of wisdom I read somewhere: “CREDIT IS GIVEN WHERE CREDIT IS DUE” 😀
@ Subhayan: Thank you Subhayan. And you must try it too! All the best!
@ Shankar: Thanks Shankar! There’s a first time for everything! Even this one is my First. Go for it!! Good Luck! 🙂
July 17, 2009 12:46 pm|
Nice one. Really wonderful. Well written, which left hidden scope—–. I felt it as a beautiful poem.
July 17, 2009 12:56 pm|
@ M Verma: Thank you Mr. Verma. Its great to know that you liked this fiction! 🙂
July 17, 2009 12:58 pm|
Hmmm.. liked the concept!
Is everyone allowed to carry it out?
July 17, 2009 1:09 pm|
@ Pawan: Its a free world! Anyone can do it! Try it out! All the best! 🙂
July 17, 2009 3:15 pm|
Sure I will!
Expect one round the corner!
July 18, 2009 2:10 am|
A good read… and intriguing too!
July 18, 2009 7:05 am|
@ Roshmi: Thanks 🙂