55 Fiction: A Farce
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. Read for the first time at The Chronicles of a techie.
Here is my First Attempt at Fiction and my First Attempt at 55 Fiction!
A Farce
Sitting on the terrace, one early morning, they smiled as they sipped their tea. They laughed when a squirrel came close. They cheered as the kids played ball. They hummed a silly new song together. What a Bliss! And then a phone call… “Ya..Chetna er Chetan…Tell me… yes…no” and she knew it was all over.
July 16, 2009 8:06 pm|
Great attempt..and of course a great result! 🙂
The story leaves numerous interpretations!! WHat finally happened? What was that phone call about? It would be definitely there in your mind…do share.
July 16, 2009 9:55 pm|
hey tht’s an intriguing one indeed! quite a suspence in d end.. coincidentally evn i hv posted a 55-Fiction 2day.. hav a luk:)
July 17, 2009 6:00 am|
That was perfect ….really a good start… a story with an element of suspense … gr8… and thanks for mentioning my name 😀
July 17, 2009 6:50 am|
awesome one! positively loved it !! … lets see i’ll try one too … (will be a huge flop anyways)
July 17, 2009 7:08 am|
wow..great one…never tried those… its difficult too…..
July 17, 2009 10:00 am|
@ Amrit: Thank you Amrit!!
Yes there could be lot of interpretations. You tell, me what you thought, I’ll share my idea soon! 🙂
@ Vipul: What a coincidence! I checked yours 55 Fiction! Its good!
July 17, 2009 10:06 am|
@ Dhiman: Thanks Dhiman!
I just followed the words of wisdom I read somewhere: “CREDIT IS GIVEN WHERE CREDIT IS DUE” 😀
@ Subhayan: Thank you Subhayan. And you must try it too! All the best!
@ Shankar: Thanks Shankar! There’s a first time for everything! Even this one is my First. Go for it!! Good Luck! 🙂
July 17, 2009 12:46 pm|
Nice one. Really wonderful. Well written, which left hidden scope—–. I felt it as a beautiful poem.
congratulation
===
July 17, 2009 12:56 pm|
@ M Verma: Thank you Mr. Verma. Its great to know that you liked this fiction! 🙂
July 17, 2009 12:58 pm|
Hmmm.. liked the concept!
Is everyone allowed to carry it out?
July 17, 2009 1:09 pm|
@ Pawan: Its a free world! Anyone can do it! Try it out! All the best! 🙂
July 17, 2009 3:15 pm|
Sure I will!
Expect one round the corner!
July 18, 2009 2:10 am|
A good read… and intriguing too!
July 18, 2009 7:05 am|
@ Roshmi: Thanks 🙂