Friday’s 55 Fiction : So Close, Yet So…
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
So Close, Yet So…
“Damn!” she said, as he helped her pick the fallen tomatoes. A coy “Thanks” and two smiles were exchanged, that day and then every day.
Some long chats… shared laughter… growing together …blissful moments later she mused, “When you click together, you are bound to leap into the future mentally”.
And, he answered, “I can’t.”
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November 20, 2009 4:50 pm|
ouch poor girl….
n wow shilpa, that was some 55er…very well written…too different..:))
November 20, 2009 5:03 pm|
tht was nice shilpa…liked it..
November 20, 2009 9:27 pm|
Another good one…
November 21, 2009 3:13 am|
Honest guy,huh !!Shilpa you are a master of 55 fiction…loved it.
November 21, 2009 3:43 am|
Short and hitting. Good one…
November 21, 2009 4:53 am|
Shilpa! that was different altogether. Liked it 🙂
November 21, 2009 5:04 am|
Some love stories are written in blood err 55 words … :p
P.S > Can you activate the Name/URL for entering comment. It will save me from loging through google.
Lakshmi Rajan
http://www.gingerchai.com
November 21, 2009 7:33 am|
that was fairly a nice call !!
if I were there i would have accepted it !!! 😛
November 21, 2009 9:50 am|
@ Neha : Yeah…sad for the girl! 🙁
Am glad you found it good! 🙂
@ Shahid : Thank you! 🙂
@ Roshmi : Thanks Girl. 🙂
@ kavita : Hmm…honest and perceptive enough to read her thoughts so clearly!!
Thanks for the appreciation! 🙂
November 21, 2009 9:54 am|
@ Madhu Rao : Thank you Madhu! 🙂
@ Musings of a lonely traveler :Am glad you liked it Mohammed! 🙂
@ Mr : Thanks 🙂
Had deactivated that due to some nuisance. Reactivating now!
@ pRiYaN : Thank you Priyan. 🙂
Hmm…that would had given a happy ending to it or a new beginning!! 🙂
November 21, 2009 7:52 pm|
ooooooooo.. so sad.. sheesha ho ya dil ho.. akhir toot jaata hai :p
November 21, 2009 8:22 pm|
Good One!!! 🙂
November 22, 2009 11:23 am|
First time here… I never attempted a 55er 🙂 will try once soon!
that was a nice shorty… thanks for visiting my blog 🙂
November 23, 2009 4:56 am|
Very nice.Kind of getting used to getting the best from you.
November 23, 2009 6:49 am|
I would have loved to say “Wow!!”, but then I didn’t get an inkling of what you wanted to say.
Now please write a “So close, yet so far… for Dummies” and tell me what was it all about. And before you say it, I know I am an idiot. 🙂
November 23, 2009 6:55 am|
reality bites !! fantasy dies 😉
November 23, 2009 7:54 am|
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November 23, 2009 8:44 am|
@ Vipul Grover : Hmmm…. 🙁
…toot jaata hai…toot jaata hai! :p
@ Shashank Shekhar : Thank you. 🙂
@ Mohan : Welcome on a “A rose is a rose is a rose!”, Mohan!
You must write a 55 Fiction. Looking forward to your tale in 55 words!! 🙂
November 23, 2009 8:45 am|
@ BK Chowla : Thank you Mr. Chowla. Your appreciation means a lot! 🙂
November 23, 2009 9:14 am|
@ Paritosh : I like your sense of humor!! 😀
@ lostworld: Sad, but true!! 🙂
November 23, 2009 9:45 am|
I appreciate for your wonderful post. I liked it very much.
November 23, 2009 1:56 pm|
Wow ! Aal izz not well eh 😉 … one more thing… cube pic ka context samajh me nahi aya …. explain 😀
November 24, 2009 6:30 pm|
nice 🙂
November 24, 2009 6:32 pm|
@ Babli : 🙂
@ Dhiman : Thanks 🙂
Ok…why cube?…see it’s nearly done but not complete, just like their relationship (from the girl’s perspective!)
November 24, 2009 6:33 pm|
@ Reema : Thanks Reema 🙂