Friday’s 55 Fiction : Renaissance
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Renaissance
She bumped into me and I bumped my head against the windowsill.
Despite the pain, I saw tears in those big eyes.
Despite the pain, I smiled.
We smiled every day, thereafter. Always together. Always talking.
One day, I held her hand.
And, Mrs. Gupta shouted, “Children!!”
Class 6-A was never better, he fondly remembered.
Acknowledgement : Thank you Pawan for sharing this beautiful storyline.
January 15, 2010 7:13 pm|
does that mean…he had crush on his class teacher??? o_O
January 15, 2010 9:05 pm|
His class teacher or his classmate?I am confused here!
January 15, 2010 10:38 pm|
Funny!!!
January 16, 2010 3:50 am|
Cute story 🙂
Keep up the wonderful work Shilpa.
Cheers!!
January 16, 2010 5:25 am|
Very cute! 🙂
January 16, 2010 5:29 am|
oh wow, this is one of the best 55ers i have read..such a beautiful young or I should say; child love story 🙂
@ Sid, it is about two 6 standard students..the guy holds the hand of his classmate and teacher interrupts..
so shilpa, kudos to you..you successfully confused the 55 fiction writer himself 😀
January 16, 2010 5:37 am|
@ Wake up, Sid: Now do you think a teacher would cry if a student has hit a windowsill?
And the picture also gels with the story.
I guess u typed this comment straight from bed (12:13 AM), hence the confusion.
So wake up man 🙂
@ Shilpa: Awesome 🙂
January 16, 2010 6:16 am|
nice one i wanna know why 6 A and not any other class 🙂
January 16, 2010 7:16 am|
makes me nostalgic 😉
January 16, 2010 10:37 am|
Back to 55-er after Drabble!!
Such a cute story-first crush smthing like that?! 😉 I wish I had an experience like this..haha
January 16, 2010 11:58 am|
awww!!! its a sweet story!
🙂
liked it
January 16, 2010 1:12 pm|
Good one!! Only that I feel that Class 6 is little bit on the lower side… Lol!!
January 16, 2010 3:02 pm|
Nice one. I like your 55 fictions.
Keep them coming very often.
January 16, 2010 4:18 pm|
hey Shilpa that was a really cute story.
I have made my first attempt at Fiction 55. do let me know how it was
Click here
January 16, 2010 6:03 pm|
so whens ur micro-fiction collection coming out??? I’ll buy one, thas for sure 😀
January 16, 2010 6:31 pm|
such a sweet story…..
I too have tried for the first time..I dunno whether it qualifies for a 55er or not..pls let me know.
January 17, 2010 7:17 am|
Nice nice.. a part of my nxt story will also reflect sumthing of similar sorts.. innocent love 🙂
January 17, 2010 11:58 am|
cute and sweet
January 18, 2010 7:16 am|
..nice story…fact or fiction ?
January 18, 2010 11:22 am|
The Friday 55 ers are something I really look forward to and they are exceeding expectations by the day ….
January 20, 2010 1:44 am|
Pure innocent unadulterated Love! Now thats awesome!
My first encounter with 55 fiction…and am loving the idea. You never know i might join in 🙂
Much Love,
Z~
January 20, 2010 7:15 am|
Lovely story of innocent love! 🙂
January 20, 2010 9:33 am|
@ Siddhesh & Pra : You got your answers here in the comments. 🙂
@ Shri Krishna : 🙂
@ Chatterbox : Thank you CB 🙂
@ Neha : Thanks a lot Neha! And thanks for clearing Sid’s doubts too 🙂
@ Pawan : 🙂
@ vEnKy : :). Good question!! 😀
@Lakshmi Rajan : LOL 😀
@ lostworld : Friday’s are for 55 Fiction! 😀
May you have a beautiful and wonderful experience now! 😀
@ Sorcerer : Thanks a lot 🙂
dattaabhishek : Thanks. You think so?? 🙂
January 20, 2010 10:13 am|
@ Nethra : Thanks Nethra 🙂
Fridays are for 55 Fiction…so check them out! 🙂
@ Tavish : Thks 🙂
Your 55 F is good too! 🙂
@ Subhayan : Thanks a TON Subhayan!! I can’t stop beaming!! 🙂
January 20, 2010 1:05 pm|
@ Guria : Thanks 🙂
@ Geeta : Thanks Geeta 🙂
Yours is a good first attempt! 🙂
Cheers 🙂
@ Vipul : Thank you Vipul. Look forward to your story! 🙂
@ Chetan : 🙂
@ Gyanban : Thks 🙂
Fiction! 🙂
January 20, 2010 1:07 pm|
@ Dhiman : Thanks for your support and kind words, Dhiman. 🙂
@ Zeenat : Thank you Zeenat. Am glad you liked it!!
And you must share your thoughts in 55 words too! Looking forward to your 55 Fiction!
Cheers 🙂
January 20, 2010 3:36 pm|
that is soooo lovely 🙂 just beautiful 🙂
January 20, 2010 4:14 pm|
@ Rajlakshmi : Thanks Rajlakshmi 🙂
January 20, 2010 7:38 pm|
Awwwwwwwwww!
January 21, 2010 6:41 am|
great blog. this blog is really amazing.
nice post. keep updating!
January 21, 2010 7:10 am|
You’ve been tagged & awarded !!! 🙂
January 21, 2010 1:14 pm|
@ Shail : 🙂
@ Roshmi Sinha : 🙂
@ AC Shophi : Thank you 🙂
@ lostworld : Thanks a ton! 🙂
Cheers
January 21, 2010 1:38 pm|
How cute! 🙂
Cheers!
January 21, 2010 6:31 pm|
AWW,reminds me of…..ME!lol awesome!*here have cookies*