55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Renaissance
She bumped into me and I bumped my head against the windowsill.
Despite the pain, I saw tears in those big eyes.
Despite the pain, I smiled.
We smiled every day, thereafter. Always together. Always talking.
One day, I held her hand.
And, Mrs. Gupta shouted, “Children!!”
Class 6-A was never better, he fondly remembered.
Acknowledgement : Thank you Pawan for sharing this beautiful storyline.
34 Responses
does that mean…he had crush on his class teacher??? o_O
His class teacher or his classmate?I am confused here!
Funny!!!
Cute story 🙂
Keep up the wonderful work Shilpa.
Cheers!!
Very cute! 🙂
oh wow, this is one of the best 55ers i have read..such a beautiful young or I should say; child love story 🙂
@ Sid, it is about two 6 standard students..the guy holds the hand of his classmate and teacher interrupts..
so shilpa, kudos to you..you successfully confused the 55 fiction writer himself 😀
@ Wake up, Sid: Now do you think a teacher would cry if a student has hit a windowsill?
And the picture also gels with the story.
I guess u typed this comment straight from bed (12:13 AM), hence the confusion.
So wake up man 🙂
@ Shilpa: Awesome 🙂
nice one i wanna know why 6 A and not any other class 🙂
makes me nostalgic 😉
Back to 55-er after Drabble!!
Such a cute story-first crush smthing like that?! 😉 I wish I had an experience like this..haha
awww!!! its a sweet story!
🙂
liked it
Good one!! Only that I feel that Class 6 is little bit on the lower side… Lol!!
Nice one. I like your 55 fictions.
Keep them coming very often.
hey Shilpa that was a really cute story.
I have made my first attempt at Fiction 55. do let me know how it was
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so whens ur micro-fiction collection coming out??? I’ll buy one, thas for sure 😀
such a sweet story…..
I too have tried for the first time..I dunno whether it qualifies for a 55er or not..pls let me know.
Nice nice.. a part of my nxt story will also reflect sumthing of similar sorts.. innocent love 🙂
cute and sweet
..nice story…fact or fiction ?
The Friday 55 ers are something I really look forward to and they are exceeding expectations by the day ….
Pure innocent unadulterated Love! Now thats awesome!
My first encounter with 55 fiction…and am loving the idea. You never know i might join in 🙂
Much Love,
Z~
Lovely story of innocent love! 🙂
@ Siddhesh & Pra : You got your answers here in the comments. 🙂
@ Shri Krishna : 🙂
@ Chatterbox : Thank you CB 🙂
@ Neha : Thanks a lot Neha! And thanks for clearing Sid’s doubts too 🙂
@ Pawan : 🙂
@ vEnKy : :). Good question!! 😀
@Lakshmi Rajan : LOL 😀
@ lostworld : Friday’s are for 55 Fiction! 😀
May you have a beautiful and wonderful experience now! 😀
@ Sorcerer : Thanks a lot 🙂
dattaabhishek : Thanks. You think so?? 🙂
@ Nethra : Thanks Nethra 🙂
Fridays are for 55 Fiction…so check them out! 🙂
@ Tavish : Thks 🙂
Your 55 F is good too! 🙂
@ Subhayan : Thanks a TON Subhayan!! I can’t stop beaming!! 🙂
@ Guria : Thanks 🙂
@ Geeta : Thanks Geeta 🙂
Yours is a good first attempt! 🙂
Cheers 🙂
@ Vipul : Thank you Vipul. Look forward to your story! 🙂
@ Chetan : 🙂
@ Gyanban : Thks 🙂
Fiction! 🙂
@ Dhiman : Thanks for your support and kind words, Dhiman. 🙂
@ Zeenat : Thank you Zeenat. Am glad you liked it!!
And you must share your thoughts in 55 words too! Looking forward to your 55 Fiction!
Cheers 🙂
that is soooo lovely 🙂 just beautiful 🙂
@ Rajlakshmi : Thanks Rajlakshmi 🙂
Awwwwwwwwww!
great blog. this blog is really amazing.
nice post. keep updating!
You’ve been tagged & awarded !!! 🙂
@ Shail : 🙂
@ Roshmi Sinha : 🙂
@ AC Shophi : Thank you 🙂
@ lostworld : Thanks a ton! 🙂
Cheers
How cute! 🙂
Cheers!
AWW,reminds me of…..ME!lol awesome!*here have cookies*