Behind the Closed Door

The door next to mine, opens and closes hastily, daily, twice in a day.That’s not unusual since the inhabitant is a single man.
There’s something about the man which makes me uneasy, though.
Today, I invited myself in, once he was back home. A moment of indecision and he opened the door widely to a spartan room.
As we chatted, I heard a muffled groan. I looked questioningly at him and then towards the other closed door. He obliged unhesitatingly. I saw another neat room with an open kitchen.
As I was leaving, I guess, I heard another groan.
This post is in response to Write Tribe Prompt #2Picture Credit: http://www.fotolia.com/Info/Images/FreeImages
May 20, 2013 3:03 pm|
What is the groan about…such suspense, is there a sequel to it!
May 20, 2013 3:18 pm|
Great suspense. .
May 20, 2013 4:37 pm|
This was spooky …Good one !
May 20, 2013 5:11 pm|
Intriguing. What or who was groaning?
May 20, 2013 5:25 pm|
I am intrigued now…getting curious.
May 20, 2013 5:54 pm|
eeps! that was spooky!
May 20, 2013 6:29 pm|
Hmmm can’t stop thinking about the groan…
May 20, 2013 7:03 pm|
Whoa! Intriguing!
May 20, 2013 8:43 pm|
wait! What happens next?!! 😀
May 21, 2013 5:58 am|
I hate drabbles! Shilpa, you cannot bring me to the edge of my seat and leave me there, and claim it is a drabble. I hereby demand an amendment to the Constitution. All drabbles must be longer and the mystery regarding groans must be resolved.
Enjoyed this one, Shilpa.
May 21, 2013 6:07 am|
Rubbish!!! I want a sequel!! I AM GROANING FOR IT!!!!
May 21, 2013 7:16 am|
So, did you see anything else there???
Destination Infinity
May 21, 2013 11:35 am|
Naughty girl, you leave us hanging like this!!
May 21, 2013 11:37 am|
Intriguing .. will look forward to the next instalment
May 21, 2013 11:42 am|
The groan is intriguing:)
May 21, 2013 3:49 pm|
I can only think of some thing sad at this moment 🙁
May 21, 2013 5:06 pm|
Maybe it s because the house is old. Sometimes the drains groan. Oh dear god, I hope its nothing bad.
May 21, 2013 6:37 pm|
creepy….I hope you don’t live next to such a single man 😀
Richa
May 21, 2013 7:54 pm|
Haha..now you’ve got all of us waiting for the sequel. Well played. 🙂 Nice one, thanks.
May 22, 2013 11:36 am|
Wow! Looking forward to a sequel if you are intending to write any. Excellent ly plotted.
May 22, 2013 11:29 pm|
kay hai andar?