55 Fiction : Commitment
She was restless. The more she tried, the more she was pulled away. The circumstances were such…
It was on top of her mind to be with her beloved.
The vacations and the exasperated looks of the family had to be ignored. She finally, was with her love and wrote this 55er for the WT prompt.
August 9, 2013 11:14 pm|
She chose wisely 🙂 Love is the first choice, always.
August 10, 2013 10:14 am|
Glad you think so too 😀
August 9, 2013 11:41 pm|
i am glad, finally, she is with her beloved.
Am I counting 56 words? I am sorry if I made a mistake.
August 10, 2013 10:16 am|
Thanks… though the husband thinks I am crazy 😀
Thank you for pointing that out… hope it is exactly 55 words now. Writing a post from the phone is a bit tedious.
August 10, 2013 6:29 am|
Love conquers all!
August 10, 2013 10:17 am|
True, it also goes on to prove that where there is a will, there is a way. 🙂
August 10, 2013 8:47 am|
Well done. Good choice 😉
August 10, 2013 10:18 am|
Thank you G 😉
August 10, 2013 8:53 pm|
well chosen 🙂
September 13, 2013 2:52 pm|
Thanks Ruchira 🙂
August 11, 2013 8:38 am|
yehi hai right choice baby..aha!
September 13, 2013 2:53 pm|
🙂
August 11, 2013 3:24 pm|
You are truly dedicated and an inspiration to us 🙂
September 13, 2013 2:54 pm|
Aww! Thanks Diana 🙂
August 12, 2013 8:50 am|
Lovely 🙂
September 13, 2013 2:59 pm|
Thanks Sheela 🙂
August 12, 2013 10:01 am|
Crazy love!! The blogger in you could not control the urge to blog…Nicely done Shilpa:)
September 13, 2013 2:59 pm|
Crazy is the word 😀
August 12, 2013 1:25 pm|
I know this feeling dear. You have no idea, how I craved to be back! 🙂 Very Nicely done. 🙂 Enjoy the Vacation. 🙂
September 13, 2013 3:00 pm|
Thanks so much, Jyothi. Glad that you relate to this as well 🙂
August 12, 2013 1:58 pm|
How do you manage to write such meaningful ones in such short span of time. Must try the 55er and spine poetry atleast once, shilpa. If i can’t i will come to you for tips:)
September 13, 2013 3:02 pm|
I have telling you to try this sometimes, you will love the challenge! So when do we see your first 55er, Asha ? 🙂
August 12, 2013 3:25 pm|
ha ha ha ha 😀 Lovvved it
September 13, 2013 3:02 pm|
Thanks Smita 😀
August 13, 2013 11:09 am|
Shilpa! 🙂 This is really funny! I’m not sure KG will appreciate your choice of beloved! 😉
September 13, 2013 3:05 pm|
He showered me with some dirty looks 😀
August 13, 2013 11:20 am|
This is lovely, Shilpa. You always manage to come up with something different.
September 13, 2013 3:07 pm|
Thanks Kalpana 🙂
August 13, 2013 11:32 am|
Love wins! A nice one 🙂
September 13, 2013 3:08 pm|
Yesss 🙂
August 13, 2013 11:59 am|
That sure is love for what ever u write 🙂
good one
September 13, 2013 3:10 pm|
🙂
August 13, 2013 12:37 pm|
Now that’s some commitment. … you are so cute Shilpa 🙂
September 13, 2013 3:11 pm|
😛
August 13, 2013 7:32 pm|
Finally,they are together .
September 13, 2013 3:12 pm|
Yessss 🙂
August 13, 2013 10:57 pm|
ha ha…dats a story for many of our people in relationship with books and blogs…sweet
September 13, 2013 3:13 pm|
We are crazy people, truly! 😀
August 14, 2013 1:03 pm|
Love wins:)
September 13, 2013 3:14 pm|
Always 🙂
August 14, 2013 8:25 pm|
As Shiva aka Apoorva has rightly highlighted, this love of books and blog takes toll on most. 😀 Shilpa this one was actually perfectly done, the best in the lot 😀 😀
September 13, 2013 3:14 pm|
Thank you so much, Richa 🙂
August 15, 2013 12:03 am|
Love conquers all 🙂
Beautiful ending !!
September 13, 2013 3:16 pm|
Thanks ME 🙂
August 15, 2013 1:21 am|
Beautifully told. wish u the best in love:)
September 13, 2013 3:17 pm|
Thanks Vishal 🙂
August 16, 2013 9:20 am|
Well written and beautifully told 🙂
September 13, 2013 3:17 pm|
Thanks Pixie 🙂
August 17, 2013 2:04 am|
haha 🙂 she made the right choice. Loved it.
September 13, 2013 3:18 pm|
You bet 😀
August 17, 2013 5:32 am|
Hahaha…cute..
September 13, 2013 3:18 pm|
Thanks Latha 🙂
August 17, 2013 12:20 pm|
i have always been inspired by you, and the ur way with the words, so here’s a eeny-weeny-tiny tribute to u here-> http://bloggerinterviews.blogspot.in/2013/08/interview-with-titli.html
September 13, 2013 3:19 pm|
Thanks a lot, LP for the mention. Truly touched and honoured 🙂
August 18, 2013 4:38 pm|
Ha ha ha! Smart as usual. I was wondering where you were.
September 13, 2013 3:19 pm|
Now you know… 😀
August 23, 2013 12:25 pm|
Hope you are having a splendid vacation!
September 13, 2013 3:20 pm|
I had a good time. Thanks Jayashree 🙂
December 24, 2013 7:28 am|
Después del verano, y la lluvia de otoño, temporada de lluvias, que es el mejor por la chaqueta, secar al aire para evitar el moho; Si hay moho, use un algodón humedecido en alcohol para limpiar con una toalla mojada, luego frote limpia, seca totalmente, entonces el conjunto es correcto. Pero tenga cuidado de no poner la exposición al sol, o es posible que desaparezca la ropa vieja ropa.