It’s all dull and grey.
The feeling of being alive and dead at the same time.
The sadness in the eyes threatens to spill every now and then.
The constant tugging lump in the throat refuses to go away.
The head wills to turn away.
The battered heart desires the perpetrator to heal it, still.
Linking this to 7 Days of Rediscovering Your Blogging Groove – Day 7 : Tell a Story
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The feeling of being alive and dead…the conflict between.these two opposite states have been depicted so vividly. Only you can do it Shilpa.
Thanks Ma’am. Glad you liked this piece of writing! 🙂
The battered heart desires the perpetrator to heal it. Better be careful.
Hope it learns 🙂
Terrific..Each line is a story
Glad you liked it! 🙂
Wow. This is great.
This is the worst kind of hell. Being alive and dead at the same time (in essence) when wounds are in the process of being healed. But it so happens that the more we try to forget them, the more they come in front of us.
It truly must be… living and dead at the same time! 😐
All the situations well said………Only a heart can do such things as they say that a heart has no brain, but it is only our heart that tells us whether we are alive or not….
Oh, like they say that the heart has a mind of its own!
While our mind will look for logic… Our hearts are a completely dif story no
Heart and Logic… well, never the twain shall meet!! 😀
Turmoil in the heart…Burnt by the one we love and yet wanting to be soothed by the same person..beautiful
Thanks Nabanita! 🙂
The two extreme opposites have been depicted really beautifully :).
Thank you Aseem. Glad you liked it! 🙂
Well written. Could have related to this one at one point of time but thankfully not any more 🙂
Glad that you are free from the pain and the turmoil, Harini! Good to see you here after a long long time! 🙂
Hmmmm….. the ways of the heart…..you never know.
Oh, they are so twisted and insane 😀
Beautiful! Such depth in those lines… loved it.
Thanks Sheethal 🙂