The long day at work added more misery in my already heavy heart.
All I wanted was you to listen to me.
Or maybe just hold me and let me cry if the words made it all the more painful.
Our eyes met and my heart smiled as you understood my silent plea.
A sudden realization dawned when I saw you reaching for the keys.
You wanted it to be left unsaid and unacknowledged.
You knew that I’d’ve told you everything.
And that didn’t fit in your scheme of things!
Aah! Everyone is self-centered; it’s just the radius that differs.
Linking this to Wordy Wednesday at Blog-A-Rhythm
33 Responses
Her agony could be felt by her voluminous and painful expressions…lovely thought Shilpa!
Thanks Sheela, glad you liked this expression!
There should be no selfishness in a real relationship, it hurts. Nicely written post.
True that, but wonder of that complete selflessness is ever there! Thanks Sulekha!
That’s why sometimes I feel it’s so important to create a wall around us…
Hmmm… may be, sometimes…
A little sympathy goes a long way. Too bad there was none forthcoming.
Yeah, bad for her!!
Poignant. Sometimes two people are just not meant to be.
Yes, no matter how much we wish they were…
Hurting some ones feelings is very cruel! Well written.
Thks Ma’am!
If the shoe does not fit you, get rid of it.
Guess, eventually would be the way forward!
Yes, sometimes such small gestures can tell us so much about the other person. Or perhaps we too fail to guess the other person’s motivation. Hard to tell either way.
True, it’s hard to judge sometimes as human behaviour has so many layers of complexities!
Still wondering if she read his expressions correctly. This guessing sometimes messes up relationships. Perhaps she should talk to him even if he doesn’t want to listen.
Well said, there’s always a way to fix something and communication is the key!
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Hi Donna! Thank you for stopping by and looking forward to read you this April! Cheers 🙂
It’s the complexity of mind and heart that want to feel understood and we close our world when we feel ignored. A sad state, I guess. Very well depicted, Shilpa:)
You said it, Vishal! Thanks and glad you liked this attempt!
But the radius is different! Its such a beautiful expression, I loved it 🙂
Thank you Nancy! Glad you liked it 🙂
The last line blew me away! It’s such a beautiful expression, I loved it! 🙂
I loved it too 🙂 ♥
Aah! How painful that might have been for her!
Btw great prompt Shilpa 🙂 I loved it. Finally made me write for Wordy Wednesday 😉
Hmm… A sad and a painful truth!
Thanks Swathi, glad that this prompt worked for you! Cheers 🙂
Oh that is such a tough moment:( communication is the key, atleast he/she will have an unloaded heart. The last line is so true… crisply expressed, shilpa! but aren’t you a queen of this art?:)
P.S: i commented on this post the day this was put up, but unfortunately it did’nt go through.
Thanks a lot, Asha! Yes, communication is the key but sadly mostly it is ignored and matters are brushed underneath the carpet!
Oh, is it! Will check my spam folder! Thank you 🙂
Aah! Just checked… your earlier comment is not there! 😐
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