Hesitancy
After letting the two buses pass, he boarded the third bus with a spring in his step.
His eyes frantically looked for her.
Their eyes met.
His smile warmed her up from within like every other time.
Like always, they got off at their respective destinations and wishing the other to make the next move.
Linking to Day 5 – Write Tribe festival of Words #5
July 14, 2016 4:38 pm|
I hope that they get a chance to make a move in the future. Life’s a bit unpredictable, no?
July 14, 2016 4:47 pm|
start of a beautiful relationship I hope 🙂 Lovely 55’er
July 14, 2016 5:05 pm|
It’s fun to go on like this for a while.. until the moment comes..
July 14, 2016 5:17 pm|
Wish one of them makes a move before the moment loses its meaning.
July 14, 2016 5:21 pm|
Aha a tantalizing beginning. 😀
July 14, 2016 5:36 pm|
Lovely story…this is how it begins…so much told in so few words! So much left to the imagination.
July 14, 2016 9:00 pm|
The guy goes through so much trouble of leaving two buses, and still doesn’t have the guts to talk to her? A few more days should be enough. Or maybe some form of recognition from the girl’s side!
Beautifully portrayed, Shilpa! 🙂
July 14, 2016 9:07 pm|
Ha ha…wimps! 😉
July 14, 2016 9:20 pm|
Starting of the game of love!Nicely written
July 14, 2016 9:21 pm|
Aww, gaadi nikal na jaaye! Lovely, innocent beginnings of a romance!
July 14, 2016 11:08 pm|
Somebody tell them, waiting doesn’t help 😉
Good one, Shilpa.
July 15, 2016 12:25 am|
This one brought a smile. 🙂
July 15, 2016 7:34 am|
Perhaps someday, somewhere they will meet…..filmi-style….:)
July 15, 2016 8:41 am|
That is the pity.
July 15, 2016 11:27 am|
Many many love stories have died a slow death thanks to this waiting. They need to talk.
July 15, 2016 11:33 am|
Go go make the move! That hesitancy on either side, sigh! Loved how you portrayed it!
July 15, 2016 11:04 pm|
After a long time I’m here and glab to be here 🙂
And this love story… how brilliantly weaved by you. How each one of them waits for the other make the first move and all this while time flies away! Hush!
July 16, 2016 12:26 pm|
A story in just few words; admire the way you presented shilpa 🙂
July 16, 2016 1:02 pm|
Opportunity lost – a common tale.
July 18, 2016 2:29 pm|
Oh no .. COME ON make that move…
Bikram’s
July 19, 2016 12:59 pm|
Next journey, perhaps one of them will make the move and then on they move together:) .good one shilpa!!
July 21, 2016 6:58 pm|
It’s been so for five decades..