After letting the two buses pass, he boarded the third bus with a spring in his step.
His eyes frantically looked for her.
Their eyes met.
His smile warmed her up from within like every other time.
Like always, they got off at their respective destinations and wishing the other to make the next move.
Linking to Day 5 – Write Tribe festival of Words #5
22 Responses
I hope that they get a chance to make a move in the future. Life’s a bit unpredictable, no?
start of a beautiful relationship I hope 🙂 Lovely 55’er
It’s fun to go on like this for a while.. until the moment comes..
Wish one of them makes a move before the moment loses its meaning.
Aha a tantalizing beginning. 😀
Lovely story…this is how it begins…so much told in so few words! So much left to the imagination.
The guy goes through so much trouble of leaving two buses, and still doesn’t have the guts to talk to her? A few more days should be enough. Or maybe some form of recognition from the girl’s side!
Beautifully portrayed, Shilpa! 🙂
Ha ha…wimps! 😉
Starting of the game of love!Nicely written
Aww, gaadi nikal na jaaye! Lovely, innocent beginnings of a romance!
Somebody tell them, waiting doesn’t help 😉
Good one, Shilpa.
This one brought a smile. 🙂
Perhaps someday, somewhere they will meet…..filmi-style….:)
That is the pity.
Many many love stories have died a slow death thanks to this waiting. They need to talk.
Go go make the move! That hesitancy on either side, sigh! Loved how you portrayed it!
After a long time I’m here and glab to be here 🙂
And this love story… how brilliantly weaved by you. How each one of them waits for the other make the first move and all this while time flies away! Hush!
A story in just few words; admire the way you presented shilpa 🙂
Opportunity lost – a common tale.
Oh no .. COME ON make that move…
Bikram’s
Next journey, perhaps one of them will make the move and then on they move together:) .good one shilpa!!
It’s been so for five decades..