Am I running away to get lost or to get somewhere?
Whatever it is, I am liking this feeling of freedom.
The spirit of adventure is beckoning me.
New sights and thrills are waiting for me.
I take a step ahead and am scooped up in powerful arms.
“Our home’s that side, baby!”, she said.
Linking this to Day 1 – Write Tribe Festival Of Words #5
July 10, 2016 10:07 am|
Very interesting! Sometimes breaking away from familiar bonds is freedom.
July 10, 2016 10:39 am|
Loved the twist at the end and the positive tone of the post. Trying something new can be refreshing.
July 10, 2016 10:51 am|
Yay! Fiction 55 is back again!
Loved the twist in the end! It’s only when we are young that we can risk to stray on a blissful adventure 🙂
July 10, 2016 11:15 am|
A dreamy adventure. Interesting!
July 10, 2016 11:47 am|
A very good take on the prompt and done in a simple manner.
July 10, 2016 12:33 pm|
Ah, sailing away on an adventure when you least know what lies ahead, just to be brought back to reality! Good one, Shilpa! 🙂
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July 10, 2016 12:53 pm|
Oh! To be a child again! The world of boundless discoveries and simple joys! Loved this Shilpa!
July 10, 2016 1:16 pm|
haaha! how children get away with such.. but it is lovely to go away and come back..
July 10, 2016 1:33 pm|
How sweet. Loved this piece of fiction, great twist! 😀
July 10, 2016 3:53 pm|
Loved the feeling I got reading this Shilpa:-) So positive and free:-) And adventure awaits us where we least expect them sometimes:-)
July 10, 2016 4:15 pm|
To break free, to live a life of adventure and be back home again safe and sound……well-captured….!
July 10, 2016 5:43 pm|
that’s so cute. Kids and their feel of adventure 😀
July 10, 2016 6:38 pm|
Yes sometimes just moving ahead without knowing the end point is great feeling. Freedom in true sense. Beautifully carved!
July 11, 2016 12:03 am|
Beautiful twist in the end! I loved the way you crafted the words, Shilpa! Not knowing the past or the future and no baggage to carry forward, isn’t that special about being an infant?
July 11, 2016 2:17 am|
Ahh! That spirit of adventure that beckons!
July 11, 2016 4:50 am|
We always have that child in us…. As we grow older society and we ourselves put a lot of barriers around…. Good one Shilpa
July 11, 2016 12:11 pm|
That child in us…. wish that was always there.
July 11, 2016 12:33 pm|
Loved it.. and with shilpa’s touch in the end:)
July 11, 2016 5:31 pm|
Trying something new is great but home is always home. Nice Shilpa.
July 11, 2016 5:40 pm|
Somewhere as we grow up, we forget to look for new paths and adventures, no? Good one, Shilpa!