Friday’s 55 Fiction : This Too Shall Pass??

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

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This Too Shall Pass??

“Faster, Dad!” he said with pain and urgency. The blood from her wound was soaking him and so were his tears. The 10 minute drive to the hospital was torturous. More so for her.

With anguish they paced outside the OT as the doctor wrote DOA.

Lola, their pug of 10 years was no more.

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16 thoughts on “Friday’s 55 Fiction : This Too Shall Pass??

  1. I have recently started reading your blog and love your writing, specially the 55 words fictions on Fridays. And this was was another great one too !!
    Blogrolling you now.

  2. you surprise me each time re..i was feeling panicky and sad; lekin in the end; it was a pug..humph

    I am not fond of pets, so i kinda found this one a bit funny 😛

  3. @ Lakshmi Rajan : I can understand. We lost our pomeranian too! 🙁

    And she was such a darling!! 🙂

    @ Tavish Chadha : Glad you liked it! 🙂

    @ Dil se : Hi and Welcome, Dil se!! 🙂 Thanks a lot and am glad you like it here!

    Cheers 🙂

    @ Shahid : Thank you Shahid. 🙂

    @ Chatterbox : I know 🙁

    Thanks for encouraging words! 🙂

    Cheers 🙂

    @ Neha : Surprised you! 😀

    I know, what you mean! 🙂

    @ Gyanban : Yeah…55 words! 🙂

    Thanks for showing the faith…but I myself lack one in myself as far as long stories are concerned. Though, writing a long story is in the Wish List! 🙂

  4. @ lostworld : You thought so!! 😀

    @ Phoenixritu : Thanks! and Surely! 🙂

    @ BK Chowla : Oh! I am so sorry! 🙁

    @ Mahesh : Thanks Mahesh! 🙂

    @ evanescentthoughts : 🙂

    @ Adisha : Thanks Adisha 🙂

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