Friday’s 55 Fiction : Pain and Gain
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Pain and Gain
She had seen pain and misery, always.
Born motherless… A slap or a kick or harsh words gave her company every waking hour.
He wiped her tears, made her laugh and made her happy… always.
“All this gloom shall pass, one day”, he used to say.
And she believed him.
He sold her, one day.
October 2, 2009 1:42 pm|
The Friday 55-Fictions are really hardhitting & raise such social evils …human trafficking is a big menace in our country…
October 2, 2009 1:50 pm|
I am never the first to comment! 😛
But, really, you are on a roll!! 🙂
Another sad truth of life held aloft. Great story as usual! Bow to you.
October 2, 2009 2:21 pm|
Good one Shilpa.
Cheers
October 2, 2009 2:22 pm|
hey,
it is the harsh reality of some people’s life.
i think, yours is an effort to stop all this…
nice post
October 2, 2009 2:33 pm|
Let me guess.. nxt friday, we’ll b having one on Female infanticide.. :p
Good one thr.. Keep thm cuming 🙂
October 2, 2009 3:19 pm|
The best 55fiction I have ever read.
October 2, 2009 3:43 pm|
Beautiful!
Nice twist 🙂
October 2, 2009 4:35 pm|
Wow 🙂
October 2, 2009 4:36 pm|
hmmmmmmmmmmm
October 2, 2009 4:59 pm|
Wow!… and with a nice twist too… keep them coming!
October 2, 2009 5:03 pm|
Wow!!
Awesome!
October 2, 2009 6:00 pm|
Very sad but very true ending..
October 2, 2009 6:57 pm|
Why should all the nice things in the world end sad?
October 2, 2009 7:15 pm|
shilpa, such a sad tale…but it does happen…my nani’s servant’s daughter was sold off by a man living in their neighbourhood…my nani helped her to rescue and now that girl is married and has a nice family…but not all are so fortunate…
October 2, 2009 11:33 pm|
ohhh! the ending shook me.. I thought she must have found a soulmate.. what a twist at the end! but sadly it is true for many people 🙁 good one!
October 3, 2009 12:42 am|
wow! Nice one! You have an amazing blog. Keep writing! 🙂
October 3, 2009 8:22 am|
sold her??? OMG…
a nice 55 shilpa..
October 3, 2009 10:42 am|
When I click on ‘post a comment’ the link disappears, I had to choose to ‘open it in a new tab’ before this opened… I am not sure if only I am facing this…
Very nice 55er. Kind of jolts you, because it is too close to real life.
October 4, 2009 10:14 am|
Your 55 Fiction stories always make an impact. 🙂
October 4, 2009 10:19 am|
a heart-wrenching one….
moved me…
October 5, 2009 10:16 am|
teared some thing…
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Keep it up!!
October 5, 2009 10:47 am|
Ouch! very heart-breaking one…
Your 55 fictions are really, really good
October 6, 2009 3:01 am|
Oops!!! That was like a solid punch on the face! It hurting!
October 6, 2009 8:15 am|
nice one.
October 6, 2009 5:38 pm|
@ALL : Thank you guys, for your feedback!! It means a lot!! 🙂
@ indianhomemaker: I believe a one time error??!! Hope all’s ok now!
November 20, 2009 9:06 pm|
sad but true…
you have a fiction 55 gift!
check mine too
http://stuffilearnttoday.blogspot.com/search/label/55%20Fiction
November 30, 2009 8:14 am|
Awesome! Pithy tale, and so true
November 30, 2009 12:20 pm|
@ Saurabh Panshikar : Hmm…
Thank you and welcome on my blog! 🙂
Checking out in a moment!
Cheers 🙂
November 30, 2009 12:22 pm|
Phoenixritu : Thanks! 🙂
And welcome on “A rose is a rose is a rose!”