Friday’s 55 Fiction : Another Day Has Gone
55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Another Day Has Gone
Friday, 9th April
- Morning walk. Done
- Newspaper. Read
- Fruits and vegetables. Bought
- Picked Adi from school.
- Nap. Taken
- Evening stroll with friends. Done
- Played Monopoly with Adi.
- Discussed the world affairs with Neil and Ayesha over dinner.
- Mask of happiness. Removed for the day.
Your absence has gone through me like thread through a needle.
Image Courtesy : Google Images
PS: Loss of your partner at an old age can leave you bereft and it can be very difficult to cope even by strong individuals.
April 9, 2010 5:59 pm|
excellent 55er..so so so very different..I thought you wrote a kinda diary; but your PS left me shocked!!!
April 9, 2010 6:12 pm|
Touching and very beautiful.
April 9, 2010 6:37 pm|
Very nice 55-er. Touching and painful.
April 9, 2010 7:56 pm|
Thats a sad story. 🙁
Nice post. 🙂
April 9, 2010 9:17 pm|
Wonderful work Shilpa 🙂
Unique and very touching!!
April 10, 2010 12:25 am|
very sad and yet very beautiful….
April 10, 2010 1:56 am|
poignant
April 10, 2010 2:29 am|
Intriguing and quite unique 55ier…
We often wear masks to satisfy societal obligations in the name of morality…
April 10, 2010 4:33 am|
As always, a very crisp post and it seems life is very simple with daily routine.
Wait—I read your PS. Life is not a simple routine.
April 10, 2010 6:14 am|
Touching…
April 12, 2010 6:42 am|
Hmmm… mask of happiness. removed for the day… Touching… A loss of partner at an old age can be really painful… and makes one emotionally drained…coz that is the age the partner are more dependent on each other…
April 12, 2010 8:22 am|
I see both my paternal/maternal grand-mothers go through their loss & it is agony .. well-expressed Shilpa:)
April 12, 2010 12:03 pm|
I read the post thrice trying to find the ‘shilpa’ touch…
And then read the post script….
There it was…!
Fine piece of writing… Very touching indeed. Not much is written about the elderly these days
April 12, 2010 3:12 pm|
wow… *SIGH*…… this actually is someone’s reality…. someone’s painful reality.
April 13, 2010 6:15 am|
Very innovative 55-er and the last line was a master stroke ….PS made the picture complete … excellent …
April 13, 2010 10:24 pm|
Beautiful and touching…
April 15, 2010 1:27 am|
I was shocked after i read the PS.
Awesome is the only word for this.