Today’s Wednesday Write Tribe prompt is to conclude both or one of these stories.
- Varsha Bagadia’s ‘A Moment of Happiness’
- Patrick O’Scheen’s ‘Proud Child’
I chose Varsha’s ‘A Moment of Happiness’. Read her story first and then check out my attempt to conclude her story.
The police officer disappointed him.
Unlike the other ‘followers’ who allowed him to savour fear or horror in their eyes, the officer showed just some confusion.
The first blow was fatal enough and the second was uncalled for, but he couldn’t take any chances.
The officer with his investigations could put his mission on a back burner.
He chuckled to note that the officer came across as a bonus, but he still needed 4 more ‘followers’ in the next 2 days.
He can’t let his master down, the powerful ‘ Angel of Light’ who directed him through his neighbour’s dog.
This is in response to the Write Tribe Prompt – Continue The Story
26 Responses
Hi Shilpa . This story is very absorbing. You have said so much in a limited number of words.Great !
Thanks a lot, Ma’am for your kind words
gosh!
Wow!!! That was quick and superb
The Angel Of Light is a new name learnt… thank you Shilpa
Glad you liked it, Bhavya
my god! u must seriously write fiction…….ur visualisation is so good!
Thanks LP, coming from you, it is huge.
that was so cool SHilpa
Thanks D
While Varsha’s story moved fast like a thriller, your’s is short and chilling… Brilliant icing on a lovely cake type
Excellent Shilpa…this pierces through so quickly…Nice fiction!
Glad you enjoyed reading this one, Kajal
Awesome ending, well done!
Thank you, Kathy
Wow!
The ending fits very well!!
beautiful writing Shilpa!
Thanks for your feedback, Pixie
You managed to bring the story to a fitting conclusion. Great story.
Thank you so much, Cynthia
OMG! To conclude another’s persons story in a short span of time and that too within 100 words……Take a bow, Shilpa:)
You have a cinema playing in fron of you or what O_O .. how easily you write up a story ya… really good
You think so??!!
Thanks Sunita
honestly with the hustle bustle I havent been able to read the two stories. So I don’t know what was the end or something but what you have written I could sense that the person “he” is a murderer. Rest I will read and come back
Oh, take your time!
Llevarán una gran cantidad de MM sección largo invierno de la chaqueta negro, la forma de vestir sentido de la moda la ropa vino, como su vestido de suéter rojo dentro del paseo, cálido y muy bien parecido, vestido de estilo retro está muy de moda, y luego seleccione con las botas , muy caliente en el invierno con un temperamento notable.