UBC Day 27 : Silence…
Tring- Tring, the phone rang.
She willed it to stop ringing.
Unmindful of her turmoil, it continued to disrupt her inner peace as well as the silence of the room.
Thoughts of an impending harassment over a crank call were clouding her mind, when she heard him say, “No, I don’t want a credit card.”
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
July 27, 2013 6:59 pm|
Fortunately, I don’t get any credit card selling/upgrading calls (any longer). BTW, why should the phone ring only in ‘Tring tring’ still? It can also ring like ‘Jadoo hai nashaa hai…’, no? π
Destination Infinity
July 27, 2013 7:50 pm|
LOL π The phone at Blogadda says Tring- Tring! So cant help but listen to that! π
July 27, 2013 7:44 pm|
Kikikikiki to the above comment π
Nice take on a prompt.. π π π
July 27, 2013 7:51 pm|
Rajesh is very creative not only in writing posts on his blog but also while commenting! π
Thks, Dee π
July 27, 2013 7:48 pm|
After a few rings, it should go to voice mail. Right?
July 27, 2013 7:53 pm|
The Tring Tring phones here have still not upgraded themselves to send the calls to a voice mail π π
July 27, 2013 8:09 pm|
ah! tell me about them..these credit card wallahs! when im just about sinking my head into the pillow for a nap, tring tring goes the phone and shooting up goes my temper(sheesh! what kind of sentence is that!)
July 31, 2013 2:45 pm|
I know… very irritating! π
July 27, 2013 8:50 pm|
That was an anti climax but matter of fact.
July 28, 2013 9:05 am|
Yeah, I chose the route of an anti-climax… providing a seemingly trivial solution to a significant conflict. π
July 28, 2013 1:03 am|
This actually made me ‘guffaw’…seriously!
July 28, 2013 9:05 am|
That was the idea!! π
July 28, 2013 1:38 am|
haha π
July 28, 2013 9:06 am|
π
July 28, 2013 9:48 am|
Those credit card calls are so irritating na?!!
nice one for WOW. π
I keep getting calls for about being a showcase home for security systems!! π
July 31, 2013 2:53 pm|
Thks Pixie π
July 28, 2013 1:19 pm|
Haha, for a second I thought yet again sad part is gonna come. But laughed at the end. π These spam calls, God π
July 31, 2013 2:57 pm|
Tried anti-climax this time π
July 28, 2013 2:55 pm|
WOW!
July 31, 2013 2:57 pm|
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July 28, 2013 4:10 pm|
I always get calls for credit cards, water filter maintainence, investment cos.Now I handle them very well. Loved your F-55. I haven’t written F-55.
July 31, 2013 2:59 pm|
You must definitely try it out! π
July 28, 2013 5:33 pm|
the end is quite an unexpected one and yet when you imagine our lives with pesky calls, who would it have been really!
July 31, 2013 3:25 pm|
True, we always wonder who might be that regular crank caller and in some homes, these calls might be the reason for discord in the family, much to the oblivion of the caller.
July 29, 2013 10:57 am|
lol!!! I pick the phone listen the word “I am calling from XYZ Bank” and promptly say, “Not interested than you” and disconnect the call π
July 31, 2013 3:25 pm|
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July 29, 2013 11:56 am|
Yes,these cranky calls are a great nuisance.
July 31, 2013 3:26 pm|
True!
July 29, 2013 5:51 pm|
I get sometimes irritated by these calls. Nicely written for the prompt π
July 31, 2013 3:26 pm|
Thks Saurabh. π
July 29, 2013 9:18 pm|
Those are worse than crank calls! π
July 31, 2013 3:27 pm|
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July 30, 2013 2:13 am|
Nice micro-fiction Shilpa π These are the times you start missing the calm of the pre-cellphone times π
July 31, 2013 3:27 pm|
True that, Reshma!