Dreams are Dreams
‘I am in love, and he is simply perfect for me’. Smilingly, she dreamed of their life together.
A beep from the mobile broke her reverie.
Her smile froze as she saw the picture sent by a colleague on Whatsapp.
‘Ignorance indeed is bliss’, she thought to herself as a lone tear escaped her eye.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. We give out a creative writing theme each weekend for Indian bloggers.
Linking this post to the Ultimate Blog Challenge and Octoberβs NaBloPoMo.
October 21, 2013 2:30 pm|
Oh sad:(
Good 55er, shilpa. I believe in this adage, Ignorance is bliss π
October 22, 2013 10:03 pm|
True, ignorance is bliss, while it lasts. But when you know the reality, it hurts a lot! π
October 21, 2013 2:32 pm|
What exactly happened?
October 22, 2013 10:03 pm|
What do you think?
October 21, 2013 2:38 pm|
so much conveyed in so less words !!
October 22, 2013 10:04 pm|
Thanks Sreeja π
October 21, 2013 4:03 pm|
Did he broke up with her..??
October 22, 2013 10:12 pm|
Could be!! π
October 21, 2013 4:11 pm|
Ignorance is indeed bliss Shilpa! Why u weaving all sad stories BTW .. The dog story n now this broke my heart I tell yea! Maybe a indication of what prolific writer u are becoming π
October 22, 2013 10:19 pm|
Sad stories… well, they are happening just by chance π
Thanks Meena, glad these stories here touch you! π
October 21, 2013 5:25 pm|
The man she was in love with loved someone else? I wonder what was in that photograph!
October 22, 2013 10:31 pm|
There are a lot of possibilities for the reader to imagine!! π
October 21, 2013 6:41 pm|
Nobody seems to have a clue about what was in the photograph. Are you making a counterpoint that ignorance is not bliss?
October 22, 2013 10:51 pm|
Obviously, there was something in the pic that made her realize that ignorance was bliss!! π
October 21, 2013 7:21 pm|
A break up ?
A broken glass is considered lucky,though
October 22, 2013 10:54 pm|
Yess!!
October 21, 2013 8:04 pm|
Suspense is killing me. What was in that picture?
October 22, 2013 10:56 pm|
Something unpalatable, I believe π
October 21, 2013 8:50 pm|
I hate heart breaks. Beautifully described in just 55 words.
October 22, 2013 11:05 pm|
Me too! Thanks Jyothi π
October 21, 2013 9:03 pm|
Awww….a small yet powerful piece of writing.
October 22, 2013 11:05 pm|
Thanks Sugandha π
October 22, 2013 5:30 am|
A breakup is always hurtful.
October 22, 2013 11:05 pm|
True!!
October 22, 2013 7:17 am|
Oh oh ! Poor thing !
October 22, 2013 11:06 pm|
π
October 22, 2013 7:26 am|
Very touching ,Shilpa.
October 22, 2013 11:06 pm|
Thank you Ma’am π
October 22, 2013 8:20 am|
So much said in so few words, Shilpa:)
October 22, 2013 11:07 pm|
Thanks Mr Bhatia π
October 22, 2013 10:25 am|
A pic that brought a tear! π
Good one Shilpa.
October 22, 2013 11:09 pm|
Thks Indrani π
October 22, 2013 2:09 pm|
Ohh heart-breaking..
October 22, 2013 11:09 pm|
π
October 22, 2013 4:24 pm|
π
October 22, 2013 11:11 pm|
π
October 22, 2013 5:36 pm|
βIgnorance indeed is blissβ Touching one Shilpa π
October 22, 2013 11:25 pm|
Thks S π
October 22, 2013 5:58 pm|
Sad! Wondering what the picture was… He with another girl, he in an accident…
October 22, 2013 11:26 pm|
Very imaginative, OM π
October 22, 2013 6:42 pm|
So what’s the picture all about? Did he break up with her, did he drink poison?
Very nicely written 55er though π
October 22, 2013 11:30 pm|
Drink poison… haha… you are so creative Anu!! Never thought about that π
October 22, 2013 8:05 pm|
How sad and heartbreaking. Just when she was so happy to be in love. Great 55 wordsβ₯
October 22, 2013 11:31 pm|
Agree… truly a sad situation to be in! Thanks Kathy π
October 24, 2013 10:19 pm|
I think the colleague sent the picture of the guy in question as his boyfriend… my take on the story π
December 11, 2014 10:44 am|
A possibility, close to what I thought π
December 10, 2014 11:24 pm|
Hi Shilpa, I have featured this poem of yours for ‘A Sneak FromThe Past’ on my blog. Check out here : http://vinithadileep.wordpress.com/2014/12/10/a-sneak-from-the-past-3/ π
December 11, 2014 10:45 am|
Thank you so much, Vinitha! You made my day π
Hopping over to your blog!