Caught Red-Handed
Hey sexy lady!
Hey! This is Myra! I think that’s for Kiara! Right?
Nope! I know what I am doing. It’s meant for you!
Really? Well, I’m flattered.
Let’s meet at the club. 8 sounds ok? Just don’t tell Kiara.
Of course, I don’t have to tell her. She is reading this over my shoulder.
Linking this to BAR-A-THON by Blog-A-Rhythm Day 4 Prompt – Caught Red-Handed
August 4, 2016 11:21 am|
Wow….thats some imagination. In so few words, you created a story and left us to imagine.
August 8, 2016 1:34 pm|
Thanks Deepali. Glad you enjoyed this 55er!
August 4, 2016 11:23 am|
🙂 Witty! Good one.
I like the names of your character. 🙂
August 8, 2016 1:34 pm|
Thanks Tarang! 🙂
August 4, 2016 11:27 am|
Oh, that two-timer!
Cute chat, though! 🙂
August 8, 2016 1:35 pm|
Thanks Shilpa 🙂
August 4, 2016 11:34 am|
Short and sweet post, Shilpa !!!
August 8, 2016 1:35 pm|
Thanks for dropping by, Vasantha!
August 4, 2016 12:03 pm|
Ha I bet he didn’t see that one coming! I love your 55-ers 🙂
August 8, 2016 1:36 pm|
Thank you, Shailaja, glad that this one caught you by surprise!
August 4, 2016 12:17 pm|
Too good! What a way to get caught. 😀
August 8, 2016 1:36 pm|
You bet 😀
August 4, 2016 12:33 pm|
Caught red-handed and now he will be beaten black and blue 🙂 Awesome writing.
August 8, 2016 1:36 pm|
Hope so. LOL 😀
August 4, 2016 12:51 pm|
hahaha Checkmate! That’s the way to tackle slimeballs. 🙂
August 8, 2016 1:37 pm|
Totally! Hope he learnt his lesson! 🙂
August 4, 2016 1:33 pm|
Heheh.. the girls might have had a hearty laugh after that. Good riddance.
August 8, 2016 1:38 pm|
Oh yes, they sure would have. It’s good they got to know about him early on, before it was too late!
August 4, 2016 1:52 pm|
Ha! Ha! That was a witty one.
August 8, 2016 1:38 pm|
Thanks Neha! Glad you enjoyed this 55er!
August 4, 2016 3:09 pm|
Haha!!! Poor fellow, if he knew this, he would have video called instead of text chat. Nice one!!
August 8, 2016 1:39 pm|
Yeah, a video chat would have saved him!
Thanks Madhavi!
August 4, 2016 4:02 pm|
Ahh I loved this. Witty!
Didn’t see this coming, I must admit 🙂
August 8, 2016 1:39 pm|
Aha! Mission accomplished. Thanks Nabanita! 🙂
August 4, 2016 4:39 pm|
Hahaha! That was smart! You are a wiz with words Shilpa!
August 8, 2016 1:40 pm|
Thanks Kala! Glad you enjoyed this one!
August 4, 2016 5:19 pm|
oh gosh!! that’s a big blunder… good he was caught 😀
August 8, 2016 1:41 pm|
Yeah, good riddance actually! 😀
August 4, 2016 5:53 pm|
Heh heh I would have given the world to see the man’s face. Cheapskate!
August 8, 2016 1:42 pm|
It would be some sight. I’d like to see him too! 🙂
August 4, 2016 5:57 pm|
I am imagining the scene when he met them at 8. 😀
Take a bow, Shilpa. So much in just 55 words. Brilliant!
August 8, 2016 1:44 pm|
Knowing the girls, I dont think he would have ventured out of his home. LOL 😀
Thanks a lot for your kind words, Rekha!
August 4, 2016 9:23 pm|
The perfect red-handed catch for a two timer 😀
I loved the way you worked a new SMS format into the 55er. Just brilliant 🙂
August 8, 2016 1:44 pm|
Thanks Mithila. Glad you enjoyed reading this 55 word story 🙂
August 4, 2016 9:30 pm|
Game, set and match! 🙂
That was funny and totally on point. Loved your brevity and wit!
August 8, 2016 1:45 pm|
Glad you enjoyed reading this 55er. Thank you, Shashi!
August 4, 2016 9:59 pm|
Hahahaha.. caught red handed! Such a witty tale.
August 8, 2016 1:45 pm|
Thanks Reema!
August 4, 2016 10:06 pm|
haha!! Witty take and the end was too good:)
August 8, 2016 1:45 pm|
Glad you enjoyed it, Vishal!
August 4, 2016 10:28 pm|
Naughty Kiara! And how well her friend knows her! Cute 55! Shilpa!
August 8, 2016 1:46 pm|
Oh yes, it’s a blessing to have such friends. Thanks Vidya!
August 4, 2016 10:29 pm|
Man!! No wonder you’re the 55’ers queen!
Extremely well written Shilpa!!
Cheers
August 8, 2016 1:46 pm|
You are so generous, Geetika. Thanks!
August 4, 2016 10:50 pm|
Serves him right! Two-timing the sisters, eh? Super take on the prompt!!
August 8, 2016 1:47 pm|
Yes, karma caught up with him real fast! Thanks Shubhangi.
August 5, 2016 11:25 am|
Serves the two-timer right!
He got his timing wrong 🙂
Creative, Shilpa!
August 8, 2016 1:48 pm|
True that! Thanks Anita!
August 5, 2016 1:22 pm|
Brilliant post Shilpa! Loved th.e brevity and the wit all condensed into 55 words
August 8, 2016 1:48 pm|
Thanks a lot, Esha. Glad you liked this 55er!