Hey sexy lady!
Hey! This is Myra! I think that’s for Kiara! Right?
Nope! I know what I am doing. It’s meant for you!
Really? Well, Iām flattered.
Let’s meet at the club. 8 sounds ok? Just don’t tell Kiara.
Of course, I don’t have to tell her. She is reading this over my shoulder.
Linking this to BAR-A-THON by Blog-A-Rhythm Day 4 Prompt ā Caught Red-Handed
50 Responses
Wow….thats some imagination. In so few words, you created a story and left us to imagine.
Thanks Deepali. Glad you enjoyed this 55er!
š Witty! Good one.
I like the names of your character. š
Thanks Tarang! š
Oh, that two-timer!
Cute chat, though! š
Thanks Shilpa š
Short and sweet post, Shilpa !!!
Thanks for dropping by, Vasantha!
Ha I bet he didn’t see that one coming! I love your 55-ers š
Thank you, Shailaja, glad that this one caught you by surprise!
Too good! What a way to get caught. š
You bet š
Caught red-handed and now he will be beaten black and blue š Awesome writing.
Hope so. LOL š
hahaha Checkmate! That’s the way to tackle slimeballs. š
Totally! Hope he learnt his lesson! š
Heheh.. the girls might have had a hearty laugh after that. Good riddance.
Oh yes, they sure would have. It’s good they got to know about him early on, before it was too late!
Ha! Ha! That was a witty one.
Thanks Neha! Glad you enjoyed this 55er!
Haha!!! Poor fellow, if he knew this, he would have video called instead of text chat. Nice one!!
Yeah, a video chat would have saved him!
Thanks Madhavi!
Ahh I loved this. Witty!
Didn’t see this coming, I must admit š
Aha! Mission accomplished. Thanks Nabanita! š
Hahaha! That was smart! You are a wiz with words Shilpa!
Thanks Kala! Glad you enjoyed this one!
oh gosh!! that’s a big blunder… good he was caught š
Yeah, good riddance actually! š
Heh heh I would have given the world to see the man’s face. Cheapskate!
It would be some sight. I’d like to see him too! š
I am imagining the scene when he met them at 8. š
Take a bow, Shilpa. So much in just 55 words. Brilliant!
Knowing the girls, I dont think he would have ventured out of his home. LOL š
Thanks a lot for your kind words, Rekha!
The perfect red-handed catch for a two timer š
I loved the way you worked a new SMS format into the 55er. Just brilliant š
Thanks Mithila. Glad you enjoyed reading this 55 word story š
Game, set and match! š
That was funny and totally on point. Loved your brevity and wit!
Glad you enjoyed reading this 55er. Thank you, Shashi!
Hahahaha.. caught red handed! Such a witty tale.
Thanks Reema!
haha!! Witty take and the end was too good:)
Glad you enjoyed it, Vishal!
Naughty Kiara! And how well her friend knows her! Cute 55! Shilpa!
Oh yes, it’s a blessing to have such friends. Thanks Vidya!
Man!! No wonder you’re the 55’ers queen!
Extremely well written Shilpa!!
Cheers
You are so generous, Geetika. Thanks!
Serves him right! Two-timing the sisters, eh? Super take on the prompt!!
Yes, karma caught up with him real fast! Thanks Shubhangi.
Serves the two-timer right!
He got his timing wrong š
Creative, Shilpa!
True that! Thanks Anita!
Brilliant post Shilpa! Loved th.e brevity and the wit all condensed into 55 words
Thanks a lot, Esha. Glad you liked this 55er!