Things are as they are, not as they should be!

What You Don’t Know

55 Fiction

You know that my heart has been ripped into a thousand pieces and it still goes on beating.

You know that my heart is hurting and am still not dying from it!

What you don’t know is that despite all, in spite of all… my heart is hoping that it’s you and me together again!

Linking this to BAR-A-THON by Blog-A-Rhythm Day 2 Prompt – What You Don’t Know

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61 Responses

  1. Hope is powerful. One of the biggest reasons to keep you going.

    It’s very skilful to conclude a story in 55 words. I have written some but I find it a little difficult. 🙂

    1. Yes, Hope keeps telling, Hold On, Pain Ends…
      Thanks a lot for your kind words. It’s addictive once you start writing. Actually, I like the thrill of chopping/adding words to get that perfect 55.

    1. True, because what’s worse than knowing you want something, but also knowing you can never have it. Thanks Kala!

    1. Hoping despite the odds… that’s because hope is that little voice that keeps whispering, ‘May be…”

    1. Thanks Sid. No, that’s not my story!
      Good to see you here, after a long time! How have you been?

    1. Now, that’s an idea. The thing is that such love stories could have more different versions than the good old happily ever after!

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