Delayed Connection
Iβm sitting by the window, waiting for a piece of my young adult life to walk in through the door.
As if on cue, heβs wading through the sea of tables and fellow diners.
His eyes light up on seeing me and before the pleasantries, he gives his reason for being late, just like before.
We talk about a million things and fall into an uncomfortable silence when itβs time to leave.
And at that very moment, I realize that Iβve never stopped loving him.
I stare at him in shocked silence, when he says, βIβve never stopped loving you.β
Linking this to Writing Wednesdays at Write Tribe. Todayβs prompt is a Wordle consisting of 10 words. From these words, use a minimum of 4 to a maximum of 10 words in the post.
July 26, 2017 11:00 pm|
Aww! When both feels the same way, there is some strong connection going on, isn’t it? Nice tale, Shilpa.
August 3, 2017 10:29 pm|
Yes, and how wonderful it would be if they stay connected that way. Thanks Vinitha. Glad you liked this story!
July 26, 2017 11:26 pm|
I like these strong connections we sometimes have with our past, yet the strength we chose in moving forward.
August 3, 2017 10:31 pm|
I so agree with you, Sheethal. And doing that would be so empowering!
July 26, 2017 11:34 pm|
Love is indeed strange .It’s there and not quite there sometimes.Only those which have a connection from both sides stand the test of time.Creatively worded.
August 3, 2017 10:33 pm|
Hmmm…. that’s true, but sometimes, some people can never be with the one they want to be, despite the connection
July 26, 2017 11:57 pm|
Wow. Talk about a strong connect. Even in thoughts. Happy, but kind of eerie too. Super story, SG.
August 3, 2017 11:08 pm|
Yes, that would be one amazing relationship when you both are on the same wavelength. Would it have some cons, I wonder!
Thanks Vinay, glad you liked this attempt.
July 27, 2017 5:09 am|
Ahhh. Romantic.
August 3, 2017 11:08 pm|
Yessss π
July 27, 2017 7:39 am|
Sometimes we meet those ppl again when the story is still unfinished and some more is left to be unfurled.
Being a die hard romantic, I loved this sweet tale of love Shilpa!
August 3, 2017 11:09 pm|
I loved the way you have expressed this, Shalini β₯
Thanks, glad you enjoyed reading this one!
July 27, 2017 7:40 am|
You are so good with these 100 word stories. Powerful and lasting. Enjoyed reading it.
August 3, 2017 11:10 pm|
You are so generous, Nabanita. Thanks π
July 27, 2017 9:49 am|
So romantic! I enjoyed your interpretation of the words list.
August 3, 2017 11:10 pm|
Thanks a lot, Alice. Glad you enjoyed this story!
July 27, 2017 10:51 am|
Quite unexpected and beautiful. Will create havoc in their lives.
August 3, 2017 11:11 pm|
Without a doubt π
Thanks, Rachna!
July 27, 2017 11:32 am|
Wow, now that’s what you call a perfect connect!!!
August 3, 2017 11:11 pm|
You bet π
July 27, 2017 4:08 pm|
Oooh I love this! Awesome attempt.
August 3, 2017 11:11 pm|
Thank you, Priya! π
July 27, 2017 4:15 pm|
beautiful drabble shilpa! Amazed at your dedication…..despite travel and a hazaar other things that you are occupied with, you come up with such creative ones. You make it seem effortless.
August 3, 2017 11:14 pm|
Oh, I am not as busy as you… It’s you who is following your passions and dreams and exploring so many new things as well. You are the busy bee, Asha. Admire you for all that and much more. So good to see you here. We must chat sometimes soon!
July 28, 2017 12:23 am|
Aww.. That is one short but a sweet tale.Enjoyed reading it.
August 3, 2017 11:14 pm|
Thanks a lot, Suja. Glad you enjoyed reading this story! π
July 28, 2017 8:15 am|
Wow that’s the kind of story I like.
August 3, 2017 11:19 pm|
Aha! I love such stories too! π
July 28, 2017 11:06 am|
Oh yes it happens in love. Longings in the silences when it comes to say goodbye and then the intrinsic connection reading each other’s minds.
August 3, 2017 11:20 pm|
You have said it so beautifully, Anamika. Love that π
July 28, 2017 1:13 pm|
Wow! I sometimes imagine this exact scene in my head. What if π
August 3, 2017 11:22 pm|
Yes, happy what if scenarios are so beautiful π
July 29, 2017 2:13 am|
Simply beautiful, Shilpa! Loved it, Might even attempt something on this tomorrow after getting inspired by your post right now. π
August 3, 2017 11:22 pm|
Thank you, Esha and I must check your blog for your story π
October 21, 2017 1:08 am|
I want to know what happens next!
October 23, 2017 9:58 am|
Wow!!! This is incredible stuff Shilpa- you are quite the queen of fiction writing making me want to know how this ended and what could have happened before!! Superb
October 25, 2017 2:26 am|
Aw, sweet! I’m a sucker for a good love story.
October 27, 2017 8:33 am|
Wow…Such a lovely spin of the given words ma’am.
This happens often between me and my hubby and I call this ‘Telepathy’ π
October 27, 2017 9:58 am|
Wow! Now, that’s simply wonderful, Meenakshi!! Thanks, glad you liked this attempt!
October 27, 2017 8:47 am|
Loved the sentimentβ€οΈ
October 27, 2017 9:57 am|
Thanks a lot, Mr Bhatia. Glad you enjoyed this piece π