‘I am in love, and he is simply perfect for me’. Smilingly, she dreamed of their life together.
A beep from the mobile broke her reverie.
Her smile froze as she saw the picture sent by a colleague on Whatsapp.
‘Ignorance indeed is bliss’, she thought to herself as a lone tear escaped her eye.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. We give out a creative writing theme each weekend for Indian bloggers.
Linking this post to the Ultimate Blog Challenge and Octoberβs NaBloPoMo.
49 Responses
Oh sad:(
Good 55er, shilpa. I believe in this adage, Ignorance is bliss π
True, ignorance is bliss, while it lasts. But when you know the reality, it hurts a lot! π
What exactly happened?
What do you think?
so much conveyed in so less words !!
Thanks Sreeja π
Did he broke up with her..??
Could be!! π
Ignorance is indeed bliss Shilpa! Why u weaving all sad stories BTW .. The dog story n now this broke my heart I tell yea! Maybe a indication of what prolific writer u are becoming π
Sad stories… well, they are happening just by chance π
Thanks Meena, glad these stories here touch you! π
The man she was in love with loved someone else? I wonder what was in that photograph!
There are a lot of possibilities for the reader to imagine!! π
Nobody seems to have a clue about what was in the photograph. Are you making a counterpoint that ignorance is not bliss?
Obviously, there was something in the pic that made her realize that ignorance was bliss!! π
A break up ?
A broken glass is considered lucky,though
Yess!!
Suspense is killing me. What was in that picture?
Something unpalatable, I believe π
I hate heart breaks. Beautifully described in just 55 words.
Me too! Thanks Jyothi π
Awww….a small yet powerful piece of writing.
Thanks Sugandha π
A breakup is always hurtful.
True!!
Oh oh ! Poor thing !
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Very touching ,Shilpa.
Thank you Ma’am π
So much said in so few words, Shilpa:)
Thanks Mr Bhatia π
A pic that brought a tear! π
Good one Shilpa.
Thks Indrani π
Ohh heart-breaking..
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βIgnorance indeed is blissβ Touching one Shilpa π
Thks S π
Sad! Wondering what the picture was… He with another girl, he in an accident…
Very imaginative, OM π
So what’s the picture all about? Did he break up with her, did he drink poison?
Very nicely written 55er though π
Drink poison… haha… you are so creative Anu!! Never thought about that π
How sad and heartbreaking. Just when she was so happy to be in love. Great 55 wordsβ₯
Agree… truly a sad situation to be in! Thanks Kathy π
I think the colleague sent the picture of the guy in question as his boyfriend… my take on the story π
A possibility, close to what I thought π
Hi Shilpa, I have featured this poem of yours for ‘A Sneak FromThe Past’ on my blog. Check out here : http://vinithadileep.wordpress.com/2014/12/10/a-sneak-from-the-past-3/ π
Thank you so much, Vinitha! You made my day π
Hopping over to your blog!